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Damn! I can't believe it's now what? 5 chapters into the fic? Well, I had to stop at the chapter where you mentioned about the tarot cards. I'll come back and leave an actual review. There's just one thing that I wanted to mention before that. I'm more likely a rookie when it comes to reading Tarot cards, but I do remember this: the tarot reader shuffles the cards with the left hand, the person seeking the reading cuts the stack of cards (when placed on the table), and then the reader, using her left hand, picks out (according to the spread you chose to use) three cards. Everything else was right, I just thought I'd point out that the person seeking the reading would be the one who cuts the stack before the cards are picked.
You may wonder why I typed so much, yet haven't reviewed yet. I'd probably forget about it, so I thought I'd write this down first then come back and leave an actual review. Sorry, if this seems inappropriate.

OMG... I love you. I love your writing so much I feel like a damn story fiend. This is the first time I have had the ability to sit down and read this (Damn College Finals) ... and I read it all in one sitting, and the sex scenes... ::Drools:: The story is sad, and beautiful, and at times heartwrenching. I think that is what I love the most about your stories... they are not just sex, but a beautiful play between intimacy, emotions, and overall heartwrenching pain. I enjoy your work so much and I do look forward to the next chapter.

nice im lovin the story

Yep again, I'm too lazy to log in.... Oh well. Anyways. yeah the support would be good. Knowing people care is always a good thing. I was kinda surprised when you put it as magic as the cause of memory lose. Interesting. Loving it so much!! Can't wait to see more!!! Laterz

WOW - that defintely answered my whining need for pr0n! I can't believe you wrote that while you were sick - I'm really not good for anything but editing my stuff when I'm sick. You so rule. Yeah, poor EMOD, but he is actually a very understanding boyfriend with an open mind - and he likes to read the non-yaoi stories since he's a big YYH fan as well. He is also a beta-reader for all my stuff, and he's wonderfully brutal when i need it. But you make me sound like some pathetic rabid yaoi fangirl! *sniff*

Yeah, but I guess that's what I am. Enough about that - I don't know how you do it, but you have this crazy storyline that I can't even figure out how it's going to be resolved and then you kick so much ass by bringing in Seimigaku (who is just the coolest evil OC ever!), and have Keiko practsing MAGICK (bonus points for that - and it's VooDoo which I don't even want to mess around with!) and you managed to tie up the story quite neatly with a crazy citrusy scene (and I never argue with the Hiei/Kurama/Yusuke threesome). It makes me want to go over my stuff and cry - your writing flows so easily - I just love it.

*chuckles* I'm surprised I was that close. Seems Keiko has been busy, which in this case is a very good thing. Can't wait to see how this spell is broken. Update soon please

This is so awesome. I love all three of our hunks together. Hiei and Yusuke are so cute taking care of their fox. Update soon.

Hehehe.... I'm too lazy to log in at the moment but I must say, I am LOVING this story!! It's so good!! It would really suck to have someone you love loose their memory. I personally couldn't deal. But, it's not about me, so who cares, ne? I can't wait to read more. Until next time!!!

You know that I've been thinking about that opening scene with Yusuke and Kurama ALL DAY. And Kurama holding out on him twice during that scene just to made Yusuke all touseled and crazy - NICE. You really do write the greatest lemony scenes. There should be a Nobel Prize...

And Hiei making cinnamon rolls - that is SO perfect for me (I'll take both Hiei and a cinnamon roll ANYDAY) - I go on about cinnamon rolls in my aff profile - or maybe I'm just hungry right now. Anyway :) I NEED TO KNOW MORE - and I'm psyched to see how this turns out - I was relating this tale to EMOD today and going on and on about the psychological aspect of it and how great it is and he told me to calm down. But I like this story...I really do, and props for writing in first person - but I'm a little scared to try it since you've stated that the tenses are really hard to use correctly (but I'll stil try!)

Have I told you yet that your are not the bomb, but the missle?

good chapter i wonder who that person could be though i hope its not karusu