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Very nice. Two words spring to mind: GO KEIKO! I like that you did not turn her into the useless little whiny baby that so many people try to make her. And her strong friendship with Yusuke but her independence from him is awesome! You write her very well. Actually, you write all of them very well. I like the supportive triangle you have built between Yusuke, Hiei, and Kurama. And I love the suffering Kurama is going through. I am enjoying this story very much, and I look forward to your nex update!

Nonesense? What nonesense? I seen none. I see a well writen, exciting, story that I don't like when it ends! Yuskue's fit drew alot of attention to me. Laughing really loud at 11:30 at night isn't a good thing. Well, in my house it isn't. Anyways, Kurama gets his memory back. Well, atleast, it looks that way... Plot twis so you never know. Well, you being the authore would know, but.... Yeah, I'm done. Just dropping by to say well done!!! Can't wait for more!!!

okay..okay... i know i loved it.. and the awesome use of your research and known intellict.. as well as all the totally great, quirky twists. i so hope everyone loves the quirky twists as much as i did. ^^ that was way fun. but that's all you're gonna get tonight, sadly.. i know it's only 2:30 am.. xD but my mom stole me for christmas shopping. and we got home at like.. 11:30. hahaha... then i had to watch their movie that my dad rented. again. but yes.. i love your updates. especially again.. with the surprise twist-y-ness of it. ^~ made me smirk, at least.

i am SO off to bed. night! ^^

Ra

Yes, the chapter was quite fun, well, at Yuusuke's expense, but, yes, :D
I'm not sure why, but for some reason the talk with the Baron reminded me of Meet Joe Black. And I love that movie, which makes me like this chapter all the more. :) Ah well, yes, thank you for clearing that out for me (tarots).
And, I think I wrote this before: I really like Keiko in this. uh...Hiei's smirk? Let's say when he's thinking of stuff to do to ________ heh, yea that.

OK, so I was reading sections of this aloud to EMOD and he was incredibly impressed with your research. He told me to tell you that he will actually be working with the Baron when he starts doing more ritual in the spring. And, of course, I was blown away by the fact that you always write fanfiction that no one has ever come close to writing before - I got up and was like OH YEAH ANOTHER UPDATE!!!! You weave the boys' relationship through the story so carefully, it's such a comfort among all the angst.

And that last paragraph - ouch. Poor Kurama, it seems that playing with memory=pain. But then again - what is Kurama without a little suffering? and Catgirl? Um, yeah, I am not deluded enough to think that the anime characters are my boyfriends...or something like that...and I thought I had problems.

I got your e-mail, can I tell you how much I love you? cause I do. and I have a bunch of stuff I can burn and send to you too. Give me a day or so and I'll have all the information in order.

wow i love this chapter it was funny especially yusuke out burst

Wow! This WAS fast. But nicely done. I loved Yusuke throwing a fit about Keiko not telling him about her boyfriend. That was really cute. I'm also glad that Botan and Koenma are not going to make trouble for our boys because they're in a relationship. Can't wait to see what's happening to fox boy now. By the way, I really didn't think that pic you sent me of Kurama was gay, but it sure got ya going, LOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLO. I sooo funnny ^_^ And you don't have to threaten me anymore, K. geeeesh! Lovin ya all day long. ^_~

Aah! Now I can review ^_^
I really like how you've written this in the first person view. You've done a fine job with it. Also, you've managed to write Kurama very convincingly. I'd imagine he'd stare at Yuusuke's ass whenever given the chance. Heh, that was pure fun. I'd say it was completely IC to have Kurama wake up with a 'problem' every morning. How creative! That was completely believable. I so see that happening.
I like Keiko's role in this fic. I may not ship Yuusuke/Keiko but I doubt she's the snarky ebil woman holding Yuusuke back that everyone makes her out to be. As of now, it's official:- I will like any moment in the fic that causes Hiei to ♥ smirk.
I hadn't realised this was a continuing fic of sorts for the Truth Dare one. That was a pleasant surprise. And the scene in chapter 5 (you know which one) was uber hawt! (heh, journal talk).
I look forward to the next update. Hopefully, I won't miss it this time.

^^ awesomeness. well. the link. LoL. the chapter..well. i can't think and it's one thirty. as for the tarot thing.. i left a comment in your LJ about that. no need to clog reviews about it. :p

but the threesome was positively stunning. and the little details.. fun, to say the least. made my night, and today was NOT a good day. major huggage to you for making a really bad week even that much better. cause you did get a smile or two out of me. ^_^


Ra

This has to be one of the most different and entertaining fic I've read in a long time. You write in first person better than anyone I know. The drama behind the loving relationship between Kur/Hiei/Yus just tug at my heart from all angles. You've shown Kurama with a side of pure innocence that I really feel is refreshing. This trust he instictually has for Yusuke and Hiei is so pure and sweet. You've managed to pull us all into not only their minds and hearts but into their souls. They truly are meant for each other. I also love the added insight of the voodoo spells with Keiko taking a major role, FOR ONCE, in an explanation of what's happening and/or a solution/remedy. Another refreshing and creative point.

The lemons are not just fuckfests, but wonderful displays of their love for each other, which makes them extremely hot and sexy. That threesome was awesome and left me wanting those boys for myself. lol. ^_~ I look so forward to upcoming chapters. I wonder what it is that Keiko is doing to that jerk who has hurt our Kurama once again, the bastard. I hope Keiko makes his dick fall off. ^_^ CYA next chappie you evil brat!!!!!!!!