rate_review Reviews

I loved all four stories to this story. This is the second time I've read through your stories (though only the ones I'm sure are finished as I dislike reading incomlete stories). You're a great writer and you just keep getting better. Question: In one of your stories you mentioned you were Pagan, which branch (religion) do you practice? If you don't want to answer that's fine but I'm curious. I'm Wiccan myself although I've started looking into other Pagan religions (again) as it doesn't quite feel right. I'm starting to wonder if I'll ever find the path that's right for me.::sweatdrop:: Anyways I hope you keep writing as you are a talented writer.

Blessed Be

Victoria Violet

I meant I loved all four stories in the series not story. I need to reread my reviews before posting them. LOL

Blessed Be

Victoria Violet

aww! that was definitely one of your sweetest stories yet. i love how you incorporated Truth, Dice, or Dare and Aftermath into their relationship. it worked very well. i also liked your usage of the voodou and psycological terms. the accented speach for the doctor's of magic was great. it seemed almost exactly perfect, from what i've heard/read of "witch doctor" speech.very nice! also, i notice you seem to enjoy making one of your characters seem almost innocent and bringing them out of that. this is going strictly off this story and the two previously mentioned, but it seems correct. if that works for you, which it most definitely does, keep it up!

gah! reading one of BlueUtopia's reviews for you i'm just noticing that i didnt' tell you how much i enjoyed the ceremony. it was undeniably beautiful. your original lemons are always amazing, and didn't fail in this story, but this one at the end almost didn't even seem like a lemon. it was as if the sex was just a backdrop to the actual beauty of their love that was represented. you did an amazing job writing the descriptions for that. it was just perfect! wonderful job!

I'd say it's beautiful, but that's not enough. Exquisite. That would be more apropriate.

Wow. Your descriptions of the intense feelings after the ceremony were amazing. I like how Hiei became very vulnerable, (actually, all three were vulnerable, but it's always nice to see Hiei be vulnerable - especially when it's done well and in character.)

The ceremony itself was cute and very sweet. It's funny how John lost his accent when he performed the ritual (and how he snuck in a bit of magick while he was doing it). Hey, he's got to be a pretty strong and resourceful guy if he's dating Keiko!

Overall, a great story - and the torture scene with them kissing each other and then killing Seimigaku? Sorry, my brain melted a bit during that part (I guess I'll have to read it again...and again) heh.

dude. that was awesome. i loved the ending.. the air was a nice touch, i thought. i dunno. i really liked it. and i have to go finish wrapping presents with my mom.. and ignore my migraine till we're done. then take something for it..and maybe get some sleep. hah. but i liked the way it completed the scene. .. and the whole thing with Seimigaku. i loved how you did that as well. but yeh.. the throbbing in various parts of my skull is starting to.. just.. be overkill. -_- whatever.

happy holidays. and new years if i don't get online in time to tell you. xD

Ra

that was a truly great fic. everything was just beautiful. the characterizations, the details, and the depth of the emotions circling the three. i enjoyed the fact that keiko wasn't some whiney-pain-in-the-arse for once. you did extremely well with her character and that of her little boyfriend of hers. ^__^ i liked the idea of using voudun instead of conventional psychology to help kurama regain his memories. very original. yet another story of yours to be recorded in my not-so-little green book of yaoi. in the last chapter, the promise of bondage was intriguing but i'm glad it didn't occur after their little ceremony. it would have totally ruined the mood. anyway, beautiful work here. i'm always looking foward to seeing more works by you. so, until next time, have a safe and happy holiday and a great new year! Keep up the good work!

That was sooooooo sweet and romantic. You gave me a fucking toothache you brat, lol. But really this chapter was extremely touching. I agree with you that the bondage scene would not have been appropriate for this particular situation. So bravo to you for getting it right once again. ^_^

wow i like the supernatural air and the marriage.