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luved this chapter. i hope the two of them are okay. so it was scientist's fault that they reacted that way. that bastard. well cant wait to read more.

HI! I haven't read your stories in long time, it's been busy summer, but I'm glad to see that you've updated a lot. Now you just need to keep updating! 'kay?

Always stopping at the good parts. I've read the other stories and they were great, so is this one! Please finish it, I'd like to see what happens next!

Those demons that took the blood, they aren't... going to clone them or something are they? Or make a demon from their blood and it be like there kid or something? *shudders* Scary... Please update!

Oh my lord, am I allowed to bow down to your writing?! Its amazing. I read coming clean and the following one-shots one day and thoday I read BUGS and this....now I need more **grin** I'm afraid that you've got me totally obsessed and I cannot wait till you update.

All three stories how superb plotlines and well developed characters. And are just generally totally amazing!

Yay! I'm so happy to read this story again. I lost my link to your page when everything was moved, so I'm really excited to have found it again. Hope you update soon!<3

Oh wow that was amazing, beautifully written and damn they already hurt Kurama that sucks Keep it up you're doing a good job.

Nyaaah cliffhanger of death. XD i hope you post more soon. I may go crazy in the meantime though.

Reasons why this chapter (and you) RULE.

1. Hiei straddling Kurama's lap and declaring ownership at the strip club. HAHAHAHAHA - I even told that to the consort and he was snickering.
2. Chu and Atsuko! (First he steals her underwear in Island and then drinks with her in Akambo) Just add Shizuru and stir!
3. The whole scene outside with Kurama in the snow just before he's assaulted. It's like a beautifully painted picture, the imagery was amazing.
4. Yukina's dress.
5. Kurama's promise to Hiei. I'd like one of those please.

Questions:
-Why wasn't Yusuke all touchy-feely with the strippers? Was he busy ogling Hiei and Kurama like a good slashy-boi should?
-How come Hiei didn't just jump on Kurama the night before the wedding and demand some more Magick Healing Co- oh wait, Kurama doesn't like that word.

Really though, you come up with some creative demons. they should consult you on the next D&D Monster Manual.

See, I knew there was a reason the other chapters started off slowly. It all had to lead up to this moment, where the real action begins. You did great with this one, too! The new setting of Yukina's wedding was very cute, and it was even better how you had Kurama and Hiei sort of recommit during the procession. I just really enjoyed the wedding and reception background of the entire chapter. And the way you had Kurama get captured was new and, of course, very interesting. Now you have me wondering why this demon wants the fox's blood. There are oh-so-many possibilities. Update soon!

Hehe, still thinking about that possible Atsuko-Chuu pairing.

Well then, at least Hiei has something to distract him from thinking about his sister's wedding night, now doesn't he? ^__^ I'm quite sure I know why they took Kurama's blood- and Hiei's- and I feel oh so sorry for those poor deformed experiments cowering in the corner . . . what an awful way to live, and I doubt they really live that long, huh?

And my hat goes off to Shiori, because having Kurama for a son and Hiei for a son-in-law by now must have put at least a few gray hairs on her head! Poor woman, what with the trip to the Demon World and the new information about her son, and then her son getting attacked . . . well, that happens a lot, so she might be used to that part by now XD But all the same, poor woman.

Well, and of course, poor Kurama, but I'm sure he'll we, ah, properly attended to. Hehe, cannot get the "Magic Healing Cock" or whatever out of my head now.