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...I'm still thinking weird KxH tube babies. The attacks and stolen blood is not helping to dissuade me. I love this story to bits, although I've been behind on the reading. :)

Whoa, I missed a couple. Don't worry, I was just curious. Great chapters mhmartini! Kurama isn't so lucky, stuff keeps happening to him left and right. Update soon!

Absolutely wonderful! Hot, but in its own way, tender scene between Kurama and Hiei, with the attack exquisitely timed for poor Hiei. I particularly loved Genkai in this chapter. I look forward to more.

YOU'RE A WHORE BUT I LOVE YOU. I didn't even have time to review the first chapter you put up this weekend before you had ANOTHER one up (hence, the whore comment) - HOWEVER - never let that be seen as complaining (hence, the I love you statement). You do provide the goodness and it was well appreciated.

First off - the B&D/S&M lemon was awesome. Again, you manage to make something like that unbelievably hot without going..there (did someone say COCK?)

*ahem*

Then, the whole scene with Genkai and the spirit wave and Hiei crashing into the wall - briliant! Points for Genkai being badass and more points for highlighting our demons' bond. I love to see their connection and you paint it so well.

Also: The way you flipped back and forth between Yukina and Kuwabara's first night togther and Hiei's figiting as he tries not to think about that was wonderful - well paced and effective. The paniced Shiori and Hiei having to deal with that also had me snickering.

Huzzah!

Short, yes, but still enjoyable. A filler is understandable after the move, so I'm just glad you finally got to update. It was kind of funny that while Kurama couldn't fulfill his promise to Hiei, Kuwabara and Yukina were doing just that! And Hiei couldn't stop thinking of them together! That was hilarious! Update soon!

i'm glad the move went well and that you finally updated. i wonder how things will be now that kuwa/yukina are together. it will be funny to see hiei's reaction and response toward it. also i hope kurama is really ok and that this new threat won't do something drastic like...kill one of them...please...ok so enough of that. i liked the chapter and hope to read more so until then adios

Awesome as always. I love how sweet this was. I can't wait for more.

Kurama! ::Pounces him and snuggles all close with him and Hiei:: I missed you so much...you had me so worried sleeping like that, and I'm still worried about the after effects of what the horrible digusting spider did to you. ::Sobs:: I was so scared... and still I'm worried. I'm glad to see you back to health and you and Hiei doing more loving things together. Oh and Hiei was in so much need for you... and he was also in a lot of sexual frustrations... ::Runs before Hiei can catch her to kill her for telling::

Okay I'm done I sware... seriously though... I am looking forward to the butt kicking still. I hope Hiei burns that vile spider up... I almost wish he had Sessy's sword so he could revive him and do it again! And lordy... not done with my fox yet? ::Suddenly terrified and braces herself:: I think I'm ready... but I have a sinking feeling I won't be completely prepared for whatever it is you have planned. Keep up the wonderful work.

I was so happy to see an update on this! I've just gotten home from hospital and was looking for a good distraction and found it in this.

I am so glad that Kurama is okay *wipes brow* I was really worried there for a moment though, I mean that is a whole lotta sleeping he did and well...is it really over. I mean we all know how nice fox torture can be as well as fox love- or is that just me? *Laugh*

Poor Hiei was so worried but also had to deal with teh idea of Kuwabara and his sister as well as a very worried Shiori. If I didn't loev the little guy so I'd almost have to giggle at his predicament. But I'm not that evil.

Anyway glad to hear the house moving went well and I'll keep my fingers crossed for the next update soon!

That was great even though poor Hiei didn't get to all the good stuff. I hope you don't use pestisides because the writing bug that bit you is a keeper. Update soon.