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I'm gonna' review here as well as your site because this chapter was just too terrific NOT to leave another review!! As I've said before, but will reiterate here, I LOVED seeing Hiei's reaction to his son! I could just picture the look of wonderment when he held the tiny foot, and the love that was more than evident not only when he looked at the boy but also when he told the baby that he would have what Hiei did not! That one line brought tears to my eyes, and though I was smiling, I was crying too!

BRAVA!!!

i'm glad to see ur back. i started to get worry. luvd the chapter...the family is complete now...hiei has a lil one to call his own and shiori has another reason to spoil the two demons. can't wait for the next update and sorry about u losing your dog...i know how that feels :(. but glad to hav u back XD

Oh my,what a great chapter to this story arc.Don't be sorry about your dog he was apart of your family and I'm sure will be missed greatly.I buried my cat(Mister)of 15 years and it broke me to the core(still does)he was my everything.Writting this story line may be getting tiring for you(understandable)but I have loved everyone of the sequels.And look forward to more.This one was fun to see their shocked faces to have a baby.No surprise to see Hiei act this way after going through what he did turning 100.Can't wait to see the grandad reaction to this.Nice job here and very very sorry for your lose

I feel bad for Hiei. I know what Akambo means, you should give me a ciber cookie! Anyways, I have no idea where this story is going, but I guess that doesn't matter, does it. I put my trust into your capable hands! Just update soon, okay? Please?

Oh, that was such a good chapter, as usual:3 Poor Hiei. He needs babies. Well, since I once again find myself with very little brain function,I'll leave this comment relatively short. Hope to read more soon <3

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA and ha.

That whole scene with Kurama in the blanket, embarrased by his family and what he said? Perfect. I could just see Kurama peeking out over the edge of the blanket in amazement and embarrassment. So well written. I know you told me about this chapter over the phone, but it was joy to read nonetheless. Poor Kurama, we're always wearing him out in one way or another.

I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan though...

And I'd like to order one insatiable fire demon. I'm sure I could handle it, and if I couldn't, I'd rent him out to other willing fangirls.

Hah! I figured that was the reason Hiei was all clingy! And now I feel special because I figured it out. I had to read the last three chapters (because I'd forgotten what had happened and because I haven't been online, as you well know) before reviewing. Still, it was worth it. Great job!

wow that was just amazing I've heard of stamina but that was well wow. Any good job nice to have an update the first thing of the new year. Hope this year you keep writting great stuff.

My birthday is in 10 days and I'm putting in my request right now for Kurama to give me what Hiei got. I guess Hiei could give it to me instead, that would be okay. I suppose my husband would do but somehow Hiei or Kurama sounds more interesting.

When you get over righters block you really come out with a bang. (I guess Hiei's the one that got banged)

Good chapter, update soon.

Interesting....breath play from you...we've influenced you...hehehe...This chapter still had a little of the vagueness to it, but then, nice quality smut makes up for that. I'd say more, but seriously, trying to read dark blue on black...ugh. I'd say I would change my default values, but, first thing in the morning, I don't want to look at white backgrounds in word (and my default text color is white...that leads to other problems.) I quit babbling now. Enjoyed it Yay :D