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No, as a matter of fact, I didn't like the chapter. I feel so bad for Hiei and Kurama. I can't believe they fought. Well, actually, I can believe it. It's what happens to every new parent I guess. I hope they make up, they are mated after all. Update!

The new addition, alright! This was a cute chapter, despite Kurama's horrible pain due to teeh spider bite and his own male demonic pride. How they deal having male pride and demon pride on top of that, I'll never know. Anyway, I can't wait to see how quickly this demon-child (literally!) grows up. Update soon!

Barney must DIE!!!! Burn, baby, burn.....*Evil cackle*

Anyway, wonderful chapter. What awaits our demon couple with their new baby?
Oh, daddy stuff gonna happen, I bet. Crying, screaming baby and terrified new
fathers....And one hell of a loving touch from Mum of course.

Please let me know when the next chapter is released from your grasp:
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HI! I'm so glad you updated! Idiot Kurama, thinking of others first all the time. I feel bad for him. Hiei is so cute with the baby! What are they going to name him? I hope they decide soon. Update!

Wow. You know way too much about baby stuff, and I would totally be like Hiei at the baby store: everything is too colourful or too garish, I would go for the black/sleek/dark wood stuff myself.

That whole scene with Hiei closing Kurama's wound and the bitten-through washcloth? Genius. Loved it, especially Hatanaka looking at the torn washcloth. I just loved the way you wrote that. No matter how much Hatanaka might humanize his stepson, Kurama is a demon and that fact just smacked him in the face.

You're doing the Hiei-father thing just right: not fluffy, more curious and protective, just the way he would be. And Hiei never having slept in a bed until he met Kurama makes me very sad.

Loved the chapter. Really? only two more? Man, you're gonna have some fun with Kurama, I can see it coming.

absolutly stunning

Okay, since I want to read what I’m writing, let’s not type this up at aff. There are times when Kurama is just an idiot, y’know. And, Hiei being “daddy” is cute. And Barney should be incinerated…and the teletubbies…and a few others I can think of. Though, it is rough on Hiei having his attention divided between his mate and his child, especially when his mate needs him and doesn’t want to impose because of their child (mostly…I think he would if it weren’t for the baby.) Anyways, Love!

I just loved the last chapter,it was so great to see Hiei be confadent with the baby.Poor Kurama though could'nt enjoy it,but he should've opened his mouth about the wound.It was nice to see his stepdad so concerned for him as well.I almost hate to ask but is there a sequel to this one to?(I almost hope so)yet I'm sure you want a rest from it to.You write so well that when you close your eyes you can almost see them in these stories and living their lives.I think both demons need a night out to themselves after everything thats happened to them and Shiori would be a great babysitter or maybeher hubby.Very Nicely Done

ok enjoyed the chapter. liked the whole shopping for baby scene, it was funny that hiei didnt really care for anything really. i can't place who he wanted to incinerate though, my only guess would be barney and if its him lol XD. how dare kurama suffer in silence knowing his mate would not lik that, shame on him. update soon

I'm sorry this is almost over but I'm hoping that two more chapters means that Koenma won't find anything bad in that journal and that soon we will have a happy ending. I can't wait for Kurama to get better and read how he and Hiei interact with their new baby. Update soon.