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Very nice ending. It makes sense that they'd have to reestablish their roles before everything could be okay again. And setting up a schedule with a baby is an excellent idea. Y'know, for not having kids, we sure know a lot. *grins* Anyways, lovely calm ending...gives you the feeling that things are going to be okay. Means you're tormenting them next, right? *grins*

I totally loved this story. You did a wonderful job on it. I will be looking out for next story in this arc and I hope it will be in the near future. You are my favorite author and THE person who gave me the inspiration to write my Hiei and Kurama stories. Thanks so much for your wonderful stories, they are the best! Please put up another story when you get a chance. ^_^

I loved this, and it was just as well done as the other two fics in the arc! (Bugs is still my fave, though, lol!) ^_^ As always, the characterizations and plot line were supurb, and your writing style never fails to arrest my attention completely. Can't wait for the next companion fic -- it will most definetly be another winner! ^_~ Keep up the good work!!!

Yes, I know I'm a whore for not reviewing sooner, but you know the deal.

This....this is what I love about your writing. You very slowly weave the words around us so that we don't notice how bad things have gotten for our two demons until it's BAD. This plot, if written by anyone else, would come out trite or fangirlish, but you execute it beautifully. Everytime Hiei tends to their child, I can see his past haunting him. And Kurama's quiet resentment is painful, almost as painful as the the interuppted lemon.

I like how since Kurama's a kitsune, he's very nasty about sharing his mate, even if it's with their child. And Hiei is so scared to repeat his past that he isn't going to listen to reason. Wonderful. I hope I see more of this soon.

I think I just died.

Yep. My heart totally melted.

Please update soon. <3
- morgan

I really love the thought you put into this. Most fics that have babies in them forget that babies eat and poop alot. I also like how you're working with the fact that having a kid puts a lot of strain on a relationship. Or so I've heard, anyway. I can kinda see both sides of this argument. Kurama is beginning to care for the baby, but still wants quality time with Hiei. Hiei wants to be a good parent and give the baby the love and attention he never got as a child. I hope Shiori smacks enough sense into the two of them for them to realize that what they want isn't mutually exclusive.

First of all, you are not a geek for looking up names for this story. Anyone who researches for their story proves how dedicated they are to creating a good piece of writing. I have followed this story avidly since "Bugs" and have enjoyed it a lot. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Oh my gosh I'm speechless but it is very good. Hope they resolve very soon I hate to see them fight. I love the name that got chosen for the baby.

What's a good story without a little angst. Poor Kurama, Hiei nneds to learn to balance his lover and baby a little. Now please don't leave us with this little cliffy too long. Hiei and Kurama can't be apart too long.

I wanna cry now. I hope you're happy about that. I also can't see what I'm typing, but that's not going to stop me.

Poor Kurama, really, being sick when they first get their son and Hiei bonding so quickly and totally. Babies are one of the worst things for a marriage, really. And, Hiei, trying to give his son everything he never had, to the neglect of his mate.

The meaning of the picture: Remember love and the first bond or every other will falter. Can't wait for what's next.