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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>.< Sorry, part of my review got cut off. ^^: Guess I got a little carried away?
Anyway, am I totally off in expecting weirdo genetically spliced KxH babies? Guess I'll just have to wait. :3
Anyway, am I totally off in expecting weirdo genetically spliced KxH babies? Guess I'll just have to wait. :3
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! I'm so glad you got to this tonight instead of making us wait. I really enjoyed this chapter. Mukuro's new for of sending a message was a very original idea. I like how you worked that out. But my favorite part in this chapter was Shiori's visit to the Makai. I can just imagine her: frail, human woman trapped in a land where creatures crave to eat her flesh, and scared out of her mind because she's completely confused. I loved it! You always do such a good job including Shiori in your fics. Update soon!
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting . . . I am sketching out some theories right now . . .
We both like to give Kurama restless nights, don't we? ^__^ I doubt he'll be getting much sleep until Hiei is better . . . or perhaps not XD I shall patiently await to see what happens next, then.
We both like to give Kurama restless nights, don't we? ^__^ I doubt he'll be getting much sleep until Hiei is better . . . or perhaps not XD I shall patiently await to see what happens next, then.
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...so it's Hiei torture for a bit now, ne? Interesting...muchly...hmmmm....*ponders*
Not sure what else to say, really...so I'll leave it at that for now.
Not sure what else to say, really...so I'll leave it at that for now.
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha - THE LIVE ONES! How could I not see the influence! Behold! The YYH/DragonLance crossover! It pwns all other crossovers *cue evil music*. Oh - look at the pairings now: Koenma/Paladine, Kurama/Tanis, Hiei/Raistlin...
OK, I'll stop now before someone gets hurt (namely me).
So many good lines in this: "Yusuke may have become an adult, but he was still Yusuke.", "Some battles were too dangerous, even for the legendary Spirit Fox.". The entire scene with the imp was incredible - especially Shiori getting a dose of angry Kurama voice. I also liked your description of Mukruo. Us fangirls may not like to think about Mukuro, but she does exsist and she is pretty badass, so I like it when people acknowledge her correctly.
But the imp...how the hell do you come up with that stuff? And why is Kurama not sleeping? ANSWER ME!
Love ya.
OK, I'll stop now before someone gets hurt (namely me).
So many good lines in this: "Yusuke may have become an adult, but he was still Yusuke.", "Some battles were too dangerous, even for the legendary Spirit Fox.". The entire scene with the imp was incredible - especially Shiori getting a dose of angry Kurama voice. I also liked your description of Mukruo. Us fangirls may not like to think about Mukuro, but she does exsist and she is pretty badass, so I like it when people acknowledge her correctly.
But the imp...how the hell do you come up with that stuff? And why is Kurama not sleeping? ANSWER ME!
Love ya.
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MMM...I am intrigued. Where will you take it from here? Why did the demon take an interest in Shiori at the end? I am curious. Please update soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
Sincerely Mea ^_^
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your mad skillz in the art of writing never cease to amaze me. Usually I end up reading sequels only to be dissapointed, but you have written one amazing sequel and are well on your way to writing another. I applaud you and your quality work *claps loudly*
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, and you're right about the changes in characters over time. It makes so much sense, since as you pointed out, all your stories are within the same universe, and they've all done some maturing and such since the beginning of "Coming Clean."
And as a side note, I completely agree with Hiei's discomfort with that term, "giving away." Blech. I like his wording of it much better.
And as a side note, I completely agree with Hiei's discomfort with that term, "giving away." Blech. I like his wording of it much better.
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I bet you thought that I forgot about you! OF COURSE NOT! You have no idea how excited I got when I saw that you updated this. Sure, I like the violent stuff, but I do need my dose of sweet Hiei and Kurama (you do it so well, and you still manage to throw in enough Kurama torture to make me giddy).
Hiei snuggling into Kurama's chest everytime they danced was adorable. I also loved Hiei's speech to Yukina about not giving her away, but presenting her to her husband. That whole section was written very well, and Hiei's specch stayed with me the entire day after I read it.
May I order one dancing Hiei?
Hiei snuggling into Kurama's chest everytime they danced was adorable. I also loved Hiei's speech to Yukina about not giving her away, but presenting her to her husband. That whole section was written very well, and Hiei's specch stayed with me the entire day after I read it.
May I order one dancing Hiei?
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter I really love how each character has progress you really have done and awesome job keep it good and take your time so each chapter comes real good.