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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I was a fan of your work even before I got brave enough to submit my first story. I will say, that chapter 13 needs fixed. But, geesh, I was worried about the length of some of my "scenes", lol. Lots of content in your chapters, but all good. :o)
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH! I'm so glad you updated. Kurama and Hiei are so wonderful together. You make them really compatable. You'll have to tell us when you write the new stories.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AND I FINALLY REVIEW! Yes, I know, I’m made of suck but I hope the gushing will make up for it.
You have no idea how proud/amazed/slightly jealous I am of you for finishing 3 stories in this arc. And you did a Kurama/Hiei baby story without using an old trite plot device and/or mpreg. That alone brings you greatness.
I loved this last chapter, how Shiori and Hatanaka told Kurama about their own experiences, so he could see that kids can cause problems in a relationship, and that he wasn’t alone. Also, Hiei putting the child on a schedule was very smart. I also didn’t know that you could hear the differences between the cries. Like I said in a previous review – you know so much about babies…almost too much. :D
And do I need to say anything about the lemon? OF COURSE I DO – IT WAS HOT. I love the aggressive!Kurama and how fighting was foreplay. They are demons after all, and many authors forget that – you don’t.
So, yeah, you own. Own everything. Love ya.
You have no idea how proud/amazed/slightly jealous I am of you for finishing 3 stories in this arc. And you did a Kurama/Hiei baby story without using an old trite plot device and/or mpreg. That alone brings you greatness.
I loved this last chapter, how Shiori and Hatanaka told Kurama about their own experiences, so he could see that kids can cause problems in a relationship, and that he wasn’t alone. Also, Hiei putting the child on a schedule was very smart. I also didn’t know that you could hear the differences between the cries. Like I said in a previous review – you know so much about babies…almost too much. :D
And do I need to say anything about the lemon? OF COURSE I DO – IT WAS HOT. I love the aggressive!Kurama and how fighting was foreplay. They are demons after all, and many authors forget that – you don’t.
So, yeah, you own. Own everything. Love ya.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read that whole story in one sitting, and it was worth it. This story progressed so naturally. I know have to go and read the first 2. Another day then. Your sooper, keep writing.
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that River and Kisuke should be singers in a death metal band when they grow up. We can call it Screaming Babies, eh? ^__~
His niece won't be a frozen bitch. Haha, I like that. Frozen bitch, makes me laugh for some reason.
Okay, may have absolutely missed it somewhere in there, but did they ever realize the meaning of the gift from Shiori and Kazuya? (Because if they did, I didn't! T__T) Or perhaps that is the prompt for another story...?
And regardless of what anyone else says, I think that leaving it with them going into the bedroom was a very un-blah ending!
His niece won't be a frozen bitch. Haha, I like that. Frozen bitch, makes me laugh for some reason.
Okay, may have absolutely missed it somewhere in there, but did they ever realize the meaning of the gift from Shiori and Kazuya? (Because if they did, I didn't! T__T) Or perhaps that is the prompt for another story...?
And regardless of what anyone else says, I think that leaving it with them going into the bedroom was a very un-blah ending!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*high pitched squeal of delight likealittlefangirl*
I have been patiently waiting and waiting and waiting for the completion of this fic and was THOROUGHLY SATISFIED. I love the easy leeway from when Kurama gets home to the very end when they make some beautiful (hard) love in the forest. Twice! Mind-numbingly beautiful. Gauh..
God praise you my dear. *bows* I hope you continue with the arc, at least in the near future.
- morgan
I have been patiently waiting and waiting and waiting for the completion of this fic and was THOROUGHLY SATISFIED. I love the easy leeway from when Kurama gets home to the very end when they make some beautiful (hard) love in the forest. Twice! Mind-numbingly beautiful. Gauh..
God praise you my dear. *bows* I hope you continue with the arc, at least in the near future.
- morgan
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love this story so much! I'm so happy that everything turned out well ^^ You really are an amazing writer. I mean... when I get to a point in a series where I can't agree with the true plot anymore, it begins to live in fic. Your universe for Yu Yu is what I generally think of as the perfect, and true world for it. So... I hope you keep writing, even if it's a little something here and there. Because if reviews are crack to you, your writing is some kind of heroine to me.
<3 Dris, hope to read more soon~
<3 Dris, hope to read more soon~
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I love it, it was really good. I'm content. For now. Well Luck on your writings, i bet they'll be amazing.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought it ended well,if not a little incompete(at least it felt that way)It was nice to see them have some problems with the new addtion to thier household.Not everything comes up roses where a baby is concerned.Neat way to handle it as well.It was great to see Hiei put even more trust in Shiori with the baby and him and his mates issues.I can't wait to see what else you've got up your sleeve for them.Very nice job
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A happy ending is always a good ending. As usual you did an excellent job. It was cool that they didn't just kiss and make up. Having them reestablish their demon roles in their mating was perfect. I can't wait to see if you write another story where the kids are a little older but of course it wouldn't be a good story without more Hiei & Kurama yumminess.