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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes!
Me again!
It is spell still not sill, silly me!
Grumbles
Me again!
It is spell still not sill, silly me!
Grumbles
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, my head hurts now! I haven't had so much fun actually paying attention and having to think about what I'm reading in a long time. THANK YOU FOR SUCH AN ENCHANTING AND MEANINGFUL READ. This is truly writing at its best. Never be afraid to post anything you write because your talent is exceptionally rare.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Before I get any further with this review:
You were going to trash this? *looms over chibi hCollen*
Right! Now that I've got that out of my system, on with the review -
I like it. It's different from what you usually write, and it shows. Yes, it was surreal in many ways and that's what made it all the more fascinating. I don't recaall ever reading much about the merging between Youko and Shuuichi. I like how you've taken it off-canon. It gave an important insight into how Shuuchi felt about having a Youko inside of him. He was not even born when Youko had merged with his body. It shows, that had he been given the choice, or if it had happened later in his life, how he would have felt then.
I like this view on it. I look forward to where you take it next.
Also, *rubs her hands in glee* ... Y/K/H moments!!
Please update whenever you can.
*goes off to read your other fics missed out on during the week* Expect reviews on them too.
You were going to trash this? *looms over chibi hCollen*
Right! Now that I've got that out of my system, on with the review -
I like it. It's different from what you usually write, and it shows. Yes, it was surreal in many ways and that's what made it all the more fascinating. I don't recaall ever reading much about the merging between Youko and Shuuichi. I like how you've taken it off-canon. It gave an important insight into how Shuuchi felt about having a Youko inside of him. He was not even born when Youko had merged with his body. It shows, that had he been given the choice, or if it had happened later in his life, how he would have felt then.
I like this view on it. I look forward to where you take it next.
Also, *rubs her hands in glee* ... Y/K/H moments!!
Please update whenever you can.
*goes off to read your other fics missed out on during the week* Expect reviews on them too.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I liked it! ^_^
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It’s kinda hard to follow at the beginning, but dreams are surreal like that. I finally decided that the part where Hiei and Yusuke were talking was something that Youko and Shuichi were watching so that Youko could show him that they cared. I imagined them being fiery blobs of energy with eyes once I got to some more of the imagery and realized that their bodies weren’t there. It’s pretty and I like it. I’m a big fan of the Yami/Hikari pairings from Yu-Gi-Oh, and this is reminiscent of that feeling of two souls interacting on a level beyond bodies. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. I got so caught up in this one that I almost burned dinner ^_^. Don’t worry, just almost.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again, forgot to rate it, lazy me!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start to it, again I love your writing style. I look forward to the next chapter, update soon please
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice its different but thats what i like