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.. it logged me out..again ..

anyway.. i know i missed the second chapter.. but i loved both of them! god i love how you write! ^^

..and then my dad came in here yelling at me to eat. yes. i will go make some ramen as soon as i finish what i'm doing daddy.... *reclick on screen* ....just a few more minutes.. -_-;; if i could remember what i was saying. again. why does this always seem to happen when i'm leaving you a review? xD i don't know.. but yes. i love the concept. i love how you set it up.. and i love those four. :D it doesn't matter if you know where you're going with it... cause well.. it's great. i usually don't know where i'g going with my chaptered stuff until i write them.. xD heh.. nice, huh? but yeh. i think that's all i got. lol. keep up the beautiful work. as always. ^~


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^__^ A little sidenote that you may (or may not) find a little amusing- I was listening to the song "Past the Point of no Return" (or whatever the hell its official name is) from the Phantom of the Opera. I wasn't really thinking about it when I did it, but I find it mildly appropriate, huh?

I like that bathtub you spoke of! Hehe, sounds fun, you know? And that comment at the end about men's penal muscles, or whatever I ought to call them, was . . . hm, interesting. I didn't know that (wow! Something I didn't know!).

Should be interesting to see what happens when Hiei enters the scene XD

I like this one!

“I know” – was that a Han Solo reference? And when you describe Yusuke’s eyes as warm chocolate, is that specifically because he’s lost his own bindings already?
[Sigh] so beautiful and mellow. Soul mates joining and healing each other, mmm, major waff [purr]. And I’ll agree with what you said about why characters with multiple personalities or souls are popular, though I hadn't thought of it in that way before.

I'm glad you decided to stick with this one.
The first lemon in the chapter, that was barely there, was just like most of my dreams. Well, not like my dreams, but you know what I mean: how it was so surreal, though lacking specifics, had more of an impact on the reader (well, on me). I couldn't get over that one and I felt the same about most of the chapter.
I hope you post more of this fic. The burden part: I like how you've written it, very insightful of you. I especially like how you're bringing Youko into the fic.
Please update whenever you can. I look forward to your next post.

Ooh . . . I like this, as you described it, surreal experiment of yours! Why did I not notice this one before? Hm . . . Eh, but I've found it now.

I liked the whole color thing, and your emphasis on eyes (I love eye thingies). And I have often wondered what it must be like to have two people in you, being both and neither at the same time (hm, kind of like hermaphrodites . . .), where Kurama is concerned, especially since seeing that one episode in the Dark Tournament where the Yoko had first appeared and as he regressed and Kurama reemerged Yoko and Suichi were talking to each other . . . I like how you worked with that; quite interesting, I liked it a lot.

Now I know you won't be leaving it off there! ^__^ I'll look forward to your next chapter. (Oh damn it! Now you have leverage against me! Ahh!)

Hmm, so Youko’s been talking to Yusuke and Hiei behind Shuichi’s back huh? Sounds like they weren’t sure the dreams they were getting were real until Shuichi actually came to them. That was sweet how Yusuke was so concerned for Kurama and pulled him in to their first kiss. It sounds like up to this point everything that Kurama was done was completely calculated and he kept himself from ever taking a chance with his heart, which is part of where the bindings came from. I’m thinking there might be something more besides that though. I’ll have to keep reading and find out ;-). Good luck with JET. My roommate and her girlfriend are both applying. Going to Japan almost seems to be a right of passage for anime fans, and getting paid to do it is even better.

nice chapter im glad kurama is becoming un-bround one by one.

Amazing...I read it twice. I've been away for a few days because of the move, and it's so great to come back to something like this. Like I've said before - you love to take chances, and this is a prime example of that. This is really a wonderful piece of work - I have had very long discussions with people over the Shuuichi/Kurama/Youko division (just recently, the bf and I had a very loud debate about it in a restaurant), and it's hard to portray correctly - but your doing it in a way it's never been done and doing it right.

I like the experimental edge to it - how you word everything - the style and tone. I also love the theme of being bound and reaching out to others to be free - that strikes a chord within me.

Keep going - I want to see Hiei's part in all this. (of course).

I sill like it(Beams at the author)