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I'm having so much fun with this. I love how Hiei is characterized. I love all of their characterizations. Yusuke rocks as a perv with a heart, Kurama is too cute being the novice for once and confused and Hiei you just want to wrap him up in your arms and kiss the hell out of him. I'm so on the edge of my seat for chapter 6. I"m still in awe of the writing style of this fic. It's like your telling me the story and only me. That's talent you hot, sexy foxy mama.

Heya, Collie! This is super cool!! I love the style of narration you've written it in, it's rockalicious! How come you didn't tell me about this before? Ahh, no matter, I still thought it was super cool! And I LOVE the idea of daily updates! Later cocodrilo.

nice chapter it seems to me our boys love to watch the track team alot.

I like this writing style, it's very fresh and it *is* just like we're sitting in front of the fireplace sharing stories. I love how you're developing Yusuke's character and reworking the cannon plot into the AU to make a version of it that could easily take place in this world. The line "noble and not so noble" is the perfect way to describe Yusuke's personality and the seaming contradictions. He is a deep character and I really appreciate how well you're writing him.

BTW, there's no such thing as reading too much FAKE. The build up of sexual tension drawn out over time is sometimes far more enjoyable than the enevitable sexual encounter. Hmmm, haven't read any of Yellow. They keep it sealed in plastic at the local bookstores [pout].

You MUST keep writing! I'm in love with this story!

nice you must update soon.

awwww i realy like this. yusake would make a good life line for kurama when times get tough. do more!

I like this fic. Usually, author commentary in any form annoys the crap out of me, but you're doing it in such a way that it flows well with the story and I don't mind it at all. Yusuke is very enigmatic in his approach to Kurama, switching between soft and vulnerable and then harsh and pushy. I like it, it even keeps me guessing.

I also liked how you addressed that Hiei used to be on the track team (I mean, come on - he is fast!), but due to problems with Kuwabara, he was let go. This is a very unusual fanfic and I like its uniquness alot! I am eager to see where this goes.

i'm a big fan of your work and you just keep getting better and better. and i want you to know that i hope you finish this fic. i love the interactions between yusuke and kurama. plus, i love this pairing too.

so i hope you update really soon^_^V

nice chapter i love how cocky yusuke is