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by hColleen

schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I gotta feel for what Kurama is going through. Hopefully his mom pulls out of it, I can't imagine how he's going to break down if she doesn't. Good thing he ran into Yusuke on his way to the hospital, even if Kurama's not certain how to deal with him I think Yusuke will help him pull together better than anyone else could. Another good chapter, I'm off to read the next one
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn Kurama is fast. At least him and Hiei have something in common, it'll give them something to talk about if nothing else. Hmm Yusuke and Hiei do not a touchy feely relationship? Hopefully that'll change, the mental images I call up thinking on just how that could change are very droolworthy. Good chapter, Im off to read the next one.
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kurama's kinda cute when he gets drunk lol I have to admire both Yusuke and Hiei's level of control by denying him what he asked for. No doubt he would have regretted it in the morning. I wonder how much of this he is going to remember when he wakes up. Good chapter, I'm off to read the next one.
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that was just as good if not better than any of those fantasies I had worked up around those two. Very nice lemon, I'm sure that Hiei won't want to go back to the way things were before. If he does, he's lost his mind permanently from that little trip it took. Awesome chapter, Im off to read the next one.
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well crap, so much for the best laid plans. They never survive past the first skirmish lol I wonder how the boys are going to get out of this one. Hopefully they manage, without damaging the already fragile relationship they've built between them. I should have known that Koenma was going to make an appearance, but as Yusuke father? That was a pleasant surprise. Good chapter, I look forward to reading the next one. Update soon please.
person vixenia
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Konnichi wa. O.O wow this story is SO awesome. I really do need to update mine....er...they can wait. Nyahahahaha, yes I am wierd like that. I actually thought of cleaning the mess during a lemon...that might be because I have been cleaning my room all the time like hell this week cause i FINALLY get to have my friends over. T.T it took forever since I was on restriction. Sigh. ah well. Anyways, enough about my clean room...or well now its dirty again but that's not the point, awesome chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. bai bai
person vampslyr
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, interesting plot twist. Well, adversity tends to bring people together. Good to know that the angst will be followed by humor. My brain kinda hurts thinking about Koenma as Yusuke’s father though. And building on what vixenia said, I was expecting Kurama to wake up and freak a little when he couldn’t remember exactly what happened and why there are two bishies with him who smell strongly of sex :-).

vampslyr
person ki-kit
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the chapter though i guess it was luck for our trio that kuwabara was around when there got kidnapped
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I can't wait to read how Kurama will react to being part of such a sexy threesome. I'm glad none of our hunks is going to be left out. Very sexy lemon. I kept waiting for Kurama to walk in in them but I really like Yusuke and Hiei taking care of him. Update soon.
person vampslyr
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
[Grin] A particular phrase came to mind while reading that lemon. Something about Yusuke ‘playing him like a finely tuned instrument.’ Ah, those moans were music to my ears. Scenes like that are all the more beautiful when the person giving please does it because he enjoys it just as much as the person receiving. Yep, gotta say ch. 6 is in my top ten of best lemons ever read; maybe top five. Mind blowing sex and sweet WAFFiness at the end. Makes for a perfect way to end the day.