rate_review Reviews

Ahh the people here are ready to kill me over keyboard issues as well. I use it so much the lettering on the keys is gone and I'm the only one here that doesn't need the visual guide. lol Guess it might be time for the both of us to get new ones. Another wonderful chapter as always. Glad the guys got out of there and that Karasu got what was coming to him. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon please.

This is such an awesome story. I love the budding love between our favorite hunks. Update soon.

Like I said before - each chapter just gets better and better - and you even put in my favourite demented demon! (I so have it bad for Karasu). The whole scene with him and Kurama was wonderful, and I loved the mini make out session in the van (yeah, Kurama doesn't know about the sex thing, but he's OK with making out with 2 guys in the back of a van during a crisis!).

I am SO waiting for the big lemon!

Okay, these guys have *obviously* not been doing their reading from the Evil Overlord list. Hehe, sidestepped and threw him into a pillar. My sensei would love that. And what’s up with Sensui? Is he on the take from Koenma, or are they just old friends/friendly rivals?

OH YEAH. AWESOME. I loved how Kurama confessed his love. Nyahahaha. THough it would be better if they didn't have sex right that moment...though hiei and yusuke could...just to spite Sakyo and mess up his favorite car. NYAHAHAHAHA

wonderful but i can't believe there got re-captured

Well, even if he doesn't know about the sex thing they're making progress... right? I must say I'm hopeful that Karasu didn't make it to the hospital and died there on the floor but then I have to worry about what legal complications will occur for our favorite red head if that happens. I love how fast you update. Wonderful chapter, I look forward to the next one

I have to say, I like the way you are writing this. The additional commentary is amusing and it breaks in just often enough to keep you guessing what smart little comments are coming in next. I like how you have made Hiei and Yusuke. Friends with benefits, though it didn't go into much detail it was obvious what it was they were doing *Evil grin* I just love that pairing myself. Great job, I'm off to read the next chapter.

I've missed some of the recent updates, hence, the review comes after 2 chapters. Or is three?
O well!
This chapter was pure fun. I've liked the different style of writing for this story the most in this chapter.
And damn, the innuendo! :D *tongue lashing?!*. I don't think I'll ever get over that. I still have a silly smile on my face over that one.
I enjoyed the part where you wrote about Yuusuke's mind in a corner, and his body getting ahead of his mind. It's nothing something I haven't read before, but the way you put it was truly special! Make that a bold and underlined 'special'.
The Y/H in it, showed a lot about their relationship. I see you caving the way for some serious Y/H/K moments. *rubs her hands in glee*
I look forward to the next update. Hopefully I'll catch it as soon as you post it! ^_^

*Chuckles* always knew that Yusuke had a softer, compassionate side buried somewhere underneath that badboy exterior. I think Kurama's going to have a near impossible time of keeping him at arms length. Though that will probably end up being a very good thing if how he's dealing with his mother's illness is any indication. Another wonderful chapter, I'm off to read the next one.