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This is a vary well writen and intertaining story. I like how you are writing this and look forword to the next chapter.

Wow that was good. I liked it. O.O you type chapters before hand...no wonder your so fast. ^.^; maybe I should try that I'm sure my reviewers would love me if I updated more often.

Damn! You update faster than I can check for updates, shitttttt, lol. Anyway, wow! talk about twists and turns and what a fun shoot out. I love that Kurama kicked Karasu's ass, you never see that anymore. It's always Karasu getting the better of Kurama. That's so sweet all the tender and comforting kissing in the van. I wanna give our boys a group hug and kiss too. Man oh man I can't wait for the lemon between the three. I'm so happy too that Yusuke and Hiei don't see Kurama as just another pretty boy to fuck, that they have feelings for him outside of having sex with him. Its also a nice touch, for a change, that Kurama isn't so willing to spread his legs like some kinda slut boy that he's usually portrayed as. It's so easy to write him that way too. It takes someone with your talent and creativity to change that and show us a different side of Kurama. Great going and I can't wait for more. I've been tied up with family stuff over the last fews days but I'll talk to you later, K.

[Scrunches up forehead in thought] If I remember my Fushigi Yuugi right, Byakko’s to the East, Seiriyu to the West, Genbu to the North and Suzaku to the South. But we’ll go with it. We didn’t spend much time on them any way. Yay for making out in the truck! And go Sensui! So Itsuki is Koenma’s best friend and Sensui’s lover. But if Sensui didn’t know Yusuke was Koenma’s son, how did he know to send for him? Chapter 10 might have been short, but it was necessary to the plot. Now that Yusuke and Hiei know how they feel about each other, tomorrow’s conversation should be interesting.

Sorry I didn't review yesterday - but I'm sick as a large demon dog AND I'm currently moving, but I did manage to read the last 2 chapters today, and I loved the second make-out session in the van - and I loved how Hiei and Yusuke finally admitted their love for each other - very raw, but sweet at the same time.

Hey - I understand, it's been a rough day for these boys, I would be surprised if they even found the energy to fool around, I'm surprised that they didn't fall asleep where they stood!

Sorry, this would be a much longer review, but I need more cold medication. (and I must add that I am couting the days until your "highly edited" ff.net chapter!)

wonderful i hope everything workls out for the boys

Awesome I love these daily updates. Great story, should be an interesting conversation in the morning.

YAY I love this. Nyahahahaha, I love how its all sweet and such. Please do keep on going. can't wait for the next chapter. bai bai

nice i can't wait to see what hapens next

Yeah they got resucued. I love it that sweet little Kurama can kick ass. Updat soon, daily would be awesome.