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Holy Hell do those boys have the worse luck or what?? It's a conspiracy I tell you, Fate is sitting up there laughing her ass off going lets see how close to ripping the clothes off of each other before A.) Scaring the shit out of them or B.) Providing an untimely interuption that's guaranteed to have one of them complaining there has to be a law against this kind of sexual frustration. *Chuckles* I'm sure it'll work out for the guys. Or I'll be making a visit to go talk with Fate about her ideas of amusement lol Hey, your pen sounds kinda cool. I haven't seen one like that but you've got me curious now. Not sure how much good one like that would do me sense I almost never actually write and use the computer instead. But it still be nice to have. Yes the headache is gone for now and I'm feeling better thank you :) though if it comes back I may be talking to Fate about my own issues and she wont like what I have to say lol Good chapter, can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!

You are such a fucking tease! That's all I'm gonna say ^_^

nice im guessing that room was like a bdsm room with all the bonding type toys and stuff.

You know, I can feel for the guys. Both of them seem so damned confused about how this has happened that it's not funny. But at least they both know what they want lol Sorry I didn't review yesterday. I'm attempting to fight off a sinus infection and didn't get a chance to read much. Combine that with trying to help someone brainstorm for a triple crossover and I ended up with one hell of a migraine. Well, I'm off to read the next chapter. :)

*snickers* What a way to wake up. That's one way to start a morning that's for damned sure lol I admire Yusuke and Hiei's amount of self control. If any one of those three were naked and in a shower with me I doubt I would be able to resist. I'm glad to see that Shiori is accepting of their relationship. That will go a long way towards helping them I think. Wonderful chapter, I can't wait to read the next one. Update soon please

nice i loved the shower scene it made my wish i was kurama

Oh god...just still loving this story. Will we see the Koenma/Yusuke discussion? (I'm just curious), I'm sure Yusuke is still quite a bit confused, and I'd like to see Koenma try to explain it. Wow...Shiori is quite the liberal woman, but I do understand the "I just brushed death" viewpoint that she has.

The shower scene...with the hairwashing...still hot. Cute, but hot. And I like Hiei's quiet and awkward nature. And, yes, the boyfriend is hating me right now, because I should be packing, but I'm on aff.net.

And you look cute as a gothic kitty!

that was such a great kickass story!!! Oh my gosh..... What a wonderful story!!!! make the continuation quick!!!!! Or a sequel.... Just continue it!!! I'm frustrated

Oh yeah the conversations were great. I loved the way you delt with 'issues', very cute. I'm glad Shiori's on their side. I can't wait for the lemon. Read you tomorrow.

YAY this is a great thing to wake up to. nyahahaha. A wonderful newly posted update of a yusxkur fanfiction. ^,^ keep it up k. yes this story is flowing quickly. I hope to see the next update soon. nyahahahahaha