rate_review Reviews

Hi there,

This story was awesome! I really liked it and finished reading your 40.000 words in one go.You must be a really fast writer to post this daily. Plus I think it's great when writers have a huge vocabulary. The narrative pieces where special and weird in a good way.
Just one thing bothers me a bit, but that happends in a lot of fics. People tend to go from innocent kissing to all the way like there's nothing inbetween.

looking forward to your other story's,
Kirsten

This story was very different. Reminded me of the Princess Bride in the narration, but way higher rated. I really liked it, and if your muse ever suggests a story like this one again, you should jump at the idea. I love your work as always.
BTW feel free to email me.

*smile* This was so good! I loved it, especially the way you wrote it, with all thoese side-comments. It's giving the impresion of a more personal narative, and that's just grate! The changes that occur in the boys' feelings are very plausible and lovely written.*another smile* Well, the point is i love this fic!

Well, I must say, I don't think any moms in the world would be happy that their son is being prused by a queer guy, let alone two.^^" Of course, that's in real life and right now Shori just wants the best for her son right? Well, love your story!!!

I really enjoyed reading this story.
I think you mentioned something being 'non-logical' a few chapters back. The correct expression is 'illogical', just so you know. No offense, but I doubt a three way relationship will last very long, even if it's nice to start off with...I guess it's out of your hands now, though. I don't think I've ever heard males being so considerate before, I didn't know they had the capacity. But if they can create balls of energy to fire at enemies, I guess even that is possible.
You really kept us waiting for that lemon scene, didn't you (you tease!) I thought they were never going to stop kissing, but they finally got round to the good stuff...yeah...
Anywho, I like your writing style (Even though I feel like I've been living in your head for the entire duration of 'school'), so I'll be reading more of your stuff.
Ciao for now,
Sukini
XXX

*sobs* it's over! Now I don't know what I will look forward to reading when I wake up *Sniffles* Very good ending though, I love how the lemon turned out. All in all it was a nice way to end the story, I'm glad everything worked out for the three of them *Happy sigh* Keep up the great work!

Well, we’ll certainly do our best to encourage you. But is it truly just for our amusement? Nice ending; I’m glad you let us know how it ended with Sensui and Itsuki too. As for the lemon, I don’t think I’ve ever seen a threesome that was able to so evenly balance the action before. It supported the feeling of their relationship. And not focusing solely on Kurama gave him a chance to gain the experience he needed to be more confident in his lovemaking. That position they ended up in was amazing. I’ve never read it anywhere before and I am now intrigued. Wish I was in a position to try it out :-P.

You know, it's funny, but regarding what you said about the b/f getting "benefits" - I've always said that fanifiction is a functional learning tool. heh.

But - GYAH, I will personally hold you responsible for my brain trauma and nosebleed today, I really didn't expect to bleed all over the keyboard like that, but it was worth it. Boy that was hot. no - really - it was hot. You gave me many pleasant images that willl be drifting through my head for the next few days (insert a pic of me with a silly grin on my face as I move into the new place).

You really do kill with all the prolificness. I understand what you said in the author's note about not going over it again and again and just sticking with your instincts. I have to say that I really enjoy your writiing not only because the plots are wonderful and erotic, but you also take chances - for example, the writing style in this story. I was telling the b/f about it yesterday - how with this story you've been addressing the readers directly, and he was like "wow - that's cool, I bet you don't see alot of that kind of creativity in fanfiction" and he's right, I don't.

As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading.

love the lemon and ending i can't wait for your next story

YAY I loved this story...T.T but sadly it has come to an end. Yup it sure as hell was worth the waiting and riddles. Can't wait to read more of your future yusxkurxhiei stories or at least yusxkur stories. I love that pairing. nyahahaha. keep up the awesome work. bai bai