rate_review Reviews

Interesting.

Not bad so far although kinda surprised your starting from the very begining.Wondering how much of the other story you'll use as well,but can't wait to see what you do with it.I liked the other authors start to this story and am sad she wont be finishing it.You had the
slave trader talk just a little off center(low class) any reason why?And you have a slave owning a full leather coat,another wow.
Anyway, I look forward to your update,hope its soon.
Glad this story isn't going to doe an unfinished death

That's a grate start for a fic. I'd love to read more of it. Seemingly, it's going to have more chatpers(I hope there'll be loads of them *grin*) There were a few spelling mistakes, but nothing that bothered me. I love the plot (burrowed, huh?) and as far as I read, it sounds really good. I like the way you portrayed Kurama and Hiei (especially Kurama, as I happen to like him quite a lot). I enjoyed this so far, and I really hope you'll write some more as soon as possible. Could you e-mail me when you up-date it? Only if it's not disturbinng you, of curse. Hope to read some more soon,
Alex.

I really did enjoy 'Rebellious', but was sad to realize that it hadn't been updated in quite a while when I first read it, which was just after the last real chapter. I do hope you continue this story to the end, because Sai started out with a great idea, and just never managed to finish it(this is not an insult to either writer).

I reaaly like this story so far and would really like to see this story will turn out. So please by all means don't stop writing this story.

I think you've got a great first chapter and truly hope that you will more very, very soon. Like Kurama, I'm intrigued by Hiei's and Yukina's pasts and would like to know them... and just how they became slaves.

I love it so far. I have read Rebellious and loved that story as well. I can't wait to see how this fic will be different or the same from that one. Please update soon.

very good start. i hope you have more luck with this story than i did...