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for In All Three Worlds

by ss_dragon_lady

person comicfancat
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow,what a chapter that last one was.It was a little bit of a wait yet very worth it.What a great way for Hiei to ask his fox to marry him.The chapter was very well thought out and written well.Hiei's reaction to Yusuke just helping Kurama up was unexspected yet
explained well.Its nice to see both demons letting Kurama's mom in to more of their lives as well.I can't wait for the next chapter and/or (hoping)another installment in the lives of Hiei,Kurama and the whole team.
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter. I can't wait for more. I can't believe that you stopped there. It was getting to a really good part. Ch'. Spoil sport. You had better update the next chapter quickly. I want to see what happens.
person Sil
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so in love with this family! ^^ They're so adorable! well, i really liked that kaihei's grown up some, he's talking already! so sweet! but, what about toushi?
and, more important, what about hiei's gift?? i'm dying to know about the ceremony, so please, update soon!!
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter. I can't wait for the next one. I had an idea. In one of the chapter or in a sidestory or something, could you write a lemon where Kurama is strapped to that futon in their master bedroom. You know, the one with the mirror hanging on the ceiling above it. Please? If you don't want to it's all right. It is your story after all. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
person comicfancat
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes,its still good and I can't wait to see what Hiei's says let alone the proposal to his Birthday gift.Is he going to wait or give it to Kurama with everyone there and have a stuned fox on his hands?And what about their other son where's he at?
Hope you update soon,can't wait to see what happens
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY update. Though saddd still didn't get to the engagement, but the whole "Private Talk" scene between Kurama and Hiei is well payment for the wait. Awesome chapter. I loved how everyone worried about them arguing that's cute. I still that its funny that Kurama is clueless! Can't wait for the next chappie keep up the good work!
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. It's been a while since I got on and I read all of your stories in this arc today. They are all amazing. I absolutly love the plot line in every single one. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
person Kitsune Foxfire
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story and I wish to read more. Keep up the good work and post soon.

Kit
person jayn
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I like it!! ^_^
person Death-angel
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well the fic was great. but it really leaves u hangin by a thread. plaese hurry with the next chapter