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by hColleen

person ruthie balboa
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this piece. I think it's delicious and slightly humorous how quickly Youko loses control of the situation. I like Kurama/Korunue pairings when they're done in a believable way and I think this is definitely believable. It is a very tasty lemon too and I was salivating over some of the imagery. You did a good job with this piece!
person vampslyr
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh GODS that was wonderful! And [drool] the perfect explanation for why Kurama is addicted to chocolate. Can't wait for the finale.
person Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot! The way Kuronue turned the tables on Yoko was priceless. So well though out. Kuronue's attitude dialogue and deception were brilliant. Yoko sure got what was coming to him! LOL
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There was waaaaaay too much squealing on my part when I saw that you put this up. And it's...wow...just, wow. I LOVE the Kurama/Kuronue pairing (and you made Kurama the uke! hee hee), I feel that Kuronue doesn't get enough face time, and you wrote him so well. The descriptions of Kurama's recations to the session were exquisite, and the entire lemon was incredibly hot - you really do have an amazing amount of talent!

I can't wait for the epilogue, or for part 6 of the arc! You rule!
person Suryallee
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was greath!
I like your Kuronue / Yoko pairing very much, not forget the Lemon too.
You are a very good writer!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so f-ing hot. I just love it when someone turns the tables on Kurama. I love the way you portrayed Kuronue. This was so good, I hope there's more. Update soon.