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by Spiders

person Jade Tokier
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I meant no facies and no author's notes IN THE MIDDLE OF THE STORY!

^_^

person Twilight
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I THINK THAT I SHOULD END UP WITH HIEI PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a good story by the way real good
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chappie! I am liking this fic a lot. As for who I'd want to end up with... Kurama! Please? Pretty please? I love Kurama... he's so sweet, kind, and that whole rose whip thing is really hot ROFLMAO. So if I'd have to put in a vote I vote for Kurama. I've seen enough You/Hiei fics for a while now it would nice to see it turn out to be Kurama.
person Tonya
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya. I kind of like this story, but I'm a little confused. It could be because it's the first three chapters and things haven't kicked up yet. But, I'll keep reading it, just because I'm curious to where your going with this. As for the pairing...I don't really care, as long as it isn't Kuwabara...he isn't my fave character. But, if I had to say just one... Hiei.
Anyway, nice fic.
person Twilight
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good what's up with the choker(sp?)
person The Green Knight
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... a little warning of "you/character" stuff? I seriously am repulse by these stories and don't like walking into traps. I mean, you CAN select "SI" or "OC" from the warning list right? I know that it's not that hard. >__<;
person Strawberry
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Start. ((Although I dun get why ppl think 'The Grudge' is scary... Oh well thats probably just me but and ways~.)) Keep up the Good Work! And I'll be looking forward to read the next chapter ^^
person FaythDarkStarSlayer
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not going to say anything right now. I really hate to say if a story is going to be good or not in the first chapter. It could be a good fic depending on how you go with it. I will say one thing about the reviewer the green knight. You don't have to be so rude. If you don't like fics like that the don't leave a review. I know it's not that hard to quote you.

Any way I'll be back for the next chapter so I can see how the meeting with the group goes. Like i said before this could be a good story if you don't make all of the characters act like a bunch of idiots.

Well carry on author.

^_^

Kat
person Altar of Wishes
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey um Fayth, Green Knight had a right and responsibility to tell people to properly label their works (though the author SHOULD know beforehand). She didn't know what she was reading until she ended up reading it. How fair was that I ask?

It's just like when I ended up reading a damn bash-fic for Kuwabara and it wasn't labeled bash-fic. I had a right to be angry because the author lead me and other readers on like that. Fair?
person Altar of Wishes
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Side note: Green Knight was just saying "label your wworks properly", more or less. There's nothing to get offended over.