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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GYAD...I TOTALLY LOVED THIS!
OK, I'm calmer now.
But there was just so much hotness. That was so well-written, I don't know where to begin. Everything about how the fight lead into the tryst was so believeable and it just wrapped around you and sucked you in.
The whole Hiei as the quiet uke thing, when Yusuke looks into his eyes and says something like "that's the hottest thing I've ever seen." Very raw, I liked that alot.
So, I have a question: Since you had stated at some point (correct me if I'm wrong) that Dreams and Reality is part of the Truth Dice or Dare arc, am I right in assuming that this arc: Youko and all his toys :) is a different arc? If I am correct, will there be a Kurama/Hiei frst time story?
You know, you really can seem to do no wrong. Another wonderful story.
OK, I'm calmer now.
But there was just so much hotness. That was so well-written, I don't know where to begin. Everything about how the fight lead into the tryst was so believeable and it just wrapped around you and sucked you in.
The whole Hiei as the quiet uke thing, when Yusuke looks into his eyes and says something like "that's the hottest thing I've ever seen." Very raw, I liked that alot.
So, I have a question: Since you had stated at some point (correct me if I'm wrong) that Dreams and Reality is part of the Truth Dice or Dare arc, am I right in assuming that this arc: Youko and all his toys :) is a different arc? If I am correct, will there be a Kurama/Hiei frst time story?
You know, you really can seem to do no wrong. Another wonderful story.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I'm glad we got to see when Hiei and Yusuke hooked up. Kurama's toys, lol. I wouldn't mind being Kurama's toy, hehehehe or Yusuke's or Hiei's. OK, pervy mind is going into full swing. That was a fun lemon. I'm glad Yusuke won over Hiei. Sometimes Hiei just needs to be put in his place. CYA
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, that's the kind of fighting I like! Poor Yusuke really left himself in a predicament. I hope you decide to write the other two arcs, I'll be looking forward to them. Keep up the great writing!