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for Mo-zoku Mating Season

by koorinoinu

person Nekosune
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Cool, yamyams for upating, cookies and pocky for awsomeness! More yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
person The Green Knight
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeez. Here we go. Another cliché of male-canon-character-turns-into-a-girl is that EVERYBODY is either in love with him/her or wants to fuck him/her. Get real. Please.

I'm not sure about everyone else reading or reviewing this, but that makes me yawn big time. 'Sides, it seems like I am the only one sparing actual thought other than "lyk this!1! plz update!". That right there is annoying as hell.
person kit-kit
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice i can't wait for the next chapter
person Nekosune
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo! An update! Yamyams for you! Cookies and pocky for coolness! ^_^ More yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
person kit-kit
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice thats alot better.
person Nekosune
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Good lemon for a beginner! Cookies and pocky for you! And I'll give you yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
person The Green Knight
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear god,

These chapters are so short and dry, I feel as though I might starve.

--The Green Knight

P.S. No more hurricanes ever!
person kit-kit
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice but you need to work on your formats. when you write use only quotation marks for everybody but give everybody there own paragraph and to tell who's talking say who talking.
person The Green Knight
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is applying several medicines to Keiko* Man, Keiko must really be running a fever here! I've never seen her act so strange and pyschotic before, have you? I better check her out for illegal substances...
person The Green Knight
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*takes Keiko out of the author's reach* Okay. Now I can enjoy this.