rate_review Reviews

In an AU setting for our guys, you have written a story that could happen to any of us. The "what could have been" when we see someone and appear to at least have some connection with the person, but neither takes that step. I did enjoy your writting style. Great story.

well. you asked so here i am. it was interesting. a little odd, yes.. but i liked it. interesting in that i could see it happening.. and yet.. not.. all at once. yes it was sad.. as you said.. but it was more tragic than "sad" in that sense of what you were alluding to. i think your style like this has real potential! ^_^ do keep it up! where as it is not angst by far.. it does play on real situations and emotions. good job with that. my compliments for that. ^~


Ra

Not too shabby. It was slightly repetitive in places and few misspelled words but all in all. Good job. It's nice to see stories like this. Stories that give a better perspective on emotions as opposed to physical reactions.