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for A Demon's Pride

by Angoli

person Everqueen
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOC or not, that was hot. Thanks so much for a happy ending, but I would have liked to know what Genkai told Kurama. LOL. I loved this story.
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really liked this story, and I hope seriously that you continue it. It does have room to be a wonderful story and this was a great pick me up from me having to deal with a Mother who had nerve testing today. I've been kinda down because of it, and this story actually made me smile. I really hope you do decide to continue it, and I hope my review gives you the inspiration to do so.
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very sweet story, I liked the sweeping god-like effect of Kurama being raised up on the vines - and Hiei wasn't OOC, I always felt that he could be very soft and gentle when it comes to love.

The lemon was hot too :) If there's more, I'd like to see it.
person Kitsune of the Rose
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. It's hard to find a fic with Hiei as seme and Kurama as the uke since most of them seem to lack a plot or end with Kurama as seme. I hope you continue this. I really want to see more uke Kurama! ^_^
person Everqueen
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm going for the happy two shot. I can't wait to read more. That was very good.
person Liz
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo! Happy two-shot, please! ^_^ Keep up the great work!