rate_review Reviews

i really love it so far, Please, please, please update as soon as you can.

I Liked the story alot
id reccomend being more clear on your descriptions because it seems to be lacking somewhat there ^^
also character description and harder detail on character personality would be good aswell
a better focus on a solid plot would be useful too
sorry im not more ex. atm but im a bit tired
i did like the story though ^^