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for Apocalypse

by Saka

person natsumi_chan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was EXTREMELY well written...you really made me see the "apocalypse" very clearly, and your characterization is pretty accurate. The emotions felt "real" to me, and I could "feel" the tragedy... This is one of the best fics I've read on aff.net, I think. You have an exceptional talent, my friend. For the love of God, keep it up!
person Twenty Questions
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..i can't belive no one has reviewed yet. This is an amazing story..yeah it is long..but this kind of story that would not have done well broken up. I hate to use the word enjoy....but i did enjoy this story. Very very gut wrentching. I have two young babies..so th ere were so me parts here..that were..well..hard to read..but that did not make it anyless amazing. I hope you write more.
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was exceedingly long, but it was worth it. You did a very good job with Yukina's POV, and it was pretty scary. The only thing was there were a few spelling mistakes here and there.
person DreamPrincess
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was too lazy to log in...I never heard of this anime, but I was drawn to read it...I liked it...I love horror...I could never write like this...I should know I've tried...But I really enjoyed it...You write very good...

DreamPrincess