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by hColleen

schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Another Yus/Kur. Yay you and yay for me. I love you. Kurama is such a sneaky little sly fox, isn't he? But what was so great is that Yusuke had similar thoughts about the fox. I certainly hope that Kurama teaches Yusuke EVERYTHING there is about sex, sex, sex, sex, lol. I can't wait for the chapter 3. And you are a brat for leaving off there, lol.
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHHH. I'm liking this one, poor Yusuke - he doesn't even know what's coming! This story has alot of potential, and I have to ask - the Hershey's Kisses thing - is that one of your faves? because I see them in alot of stories, I'm just curious. And I understand the A/N about the story going where you don't expect, it happens to me a lot. Sometimes I go with it, sometimes I have to steer it back on track, but - again - I'm loving this and I'd like to see more.

And I'm so jealous - I write an hour a day, sometimes two, and I don't get nearly as much out as you do, you're very prolific and I'm very picky and slow.
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL I think Kurama just may have met his match here. Excellent set up and dialogue, love the length of the chapter. I look forward to the next installment, update soon please.
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schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice