rate_review Reviews

OMG, I loved this story! You really know how to write a steamy lemon! The hotness between Yusuke and Kurama is just too much (and despite earlier reviews - I encourage you to make them sluts - I like their agreement - it's just a fun thing, no strings attached!)

The description in the lemon was exquisite, of course, I snickered all day about the whole cucumber thing - Yusuke is really a dirty boy, and it's wonderful - hey, he wore Kurama out, and that's no easy task, he IS a Youko after all.

Very well-written, I enjoyed this alot!

Yes! You most certainly redeemed your brattiness. That was one great lemon. Kurama and Yusuke are so sexy. I like the fact that they are only going to fuck when they're both in the mood, but no emotional ties. I do believe though that eventually they will develope that emotional tie. I think they're both just kidding themselves, ya know. I loved the cucumber. I laughed my ass off. Only you could think of that. I'll have to come up with something similar, for fun, in my next chappie. Welllllllll.... I think I need to go take a cold shower now. My husband is away for the weekend and my daughter is with her father (my ex). I think I'll turn that cold shower into a hot shower and utilize my new shower massager, lol. Good thing no one is home ^_~ Thanks for the great lemon and getting me hornier than hell while my husband's away. ***brat*** I'll email you tonight.

Love you
KHL

nice

How did I survive reading this? Well... my roommate being out probably helped, hehe. You write the best first-time lemons ever. Yusuke being too shy to come out and say what he wants always gets me. And then when he does say it he's so hot and I need to break out the ice to cool down ;-D.

I noticed Kurama kept making comments about his surpise that Yusuke took to making love so well and wasn't in pain; is that because of his demon blood and are you going to bring that out in any of the related stories you have planned? Mmm, thank you for updating so often [HUG].

You'll be writing more soon right? RIGHT!? This is getting really good and I have NEVER seen these two in a situation like this before. I need to know there will be more soon because I am really loving this fic. *Drools over Kurama and Yusuke*

I love the way you're teasing me with these two well-crafted chapters. I can't wait for the third!

[drool drool slurp] Eak! Better clean that up before the keyboard shorts out. Um, yummy. I love tender and shy Kurama, especially combined with the master gamesman. He's so focused on his part of the game that he can't see his prey is already responding. Be really funny if Yusuke thinks the fox is being shy and decides to do the seducing himself. Probably suprise Kurama so much that he'd just melt under it and let Yusuke do the leading.

good chapter im glad everything went as planed sort of anyway

oh nice.. Yusuke is definitely blunt and to the point when he figures out what he wants ain't he? Very good chapter, I look forward to reading the next one. Update soon please.

You made them sluts.... How could you? I like yusuke/kurama kurama/yusuke relationships.. But this really wasn't good if you make them sluts. Oh I can fuck yusuke but go off and be with someone else bleh no, that isn't kurama. not in his human form. you suck