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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you appreciated the dancing! This chapter was so cute - Kurama needs to calm down, but I do see it from his side - he told Hiei about his partners and Hiei should have been as forthcoming. What - so now they're celibate? That just hurts, I like my OTP when they're happy and satisfied! I'll do more dancing if that's what it takes! **goes to put on dancing shoes**
But really - I enjoyed this chapter, you covered alot of ground, I can't wait for more!
But really - I enjoyed this chapter, you covered alot of ground, I can't wait for more!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! continue soon!!! I think u have a miss type at the end...did Kurama mean to say...is sex all there is in our relationship
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes, a chapter with no 'action' provides a much-needed break in the story. Chapters such as this (and of which this chapter is a prime example) serve to provide the reader with background and insight into the characters, thereby making them all the more 'real' to said reader.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Dances in glee and straight happiness:: Ooo I was so happy to see this updated. Hehehe I really liked this chapter... all the jealousy issues were quite interesting and amusing. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Thank you! I like how it's coming so far. It's good that they've at least tried to get some dialogue going, every healthy relationship needs that! I can't wait to se what they have for an idea to 'prove their love' in the next chapter!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope they dont break up! That'll be so sad! Great chappy though! UPDATE SOON!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only TWO chapters up and already I am loving this story. It will be very interesting to see if Hiei can figure out exactly how he knows Yukina, and once he does, what he will do with that knowledge.
And what of Mukuro?!? Something tells me she may figure prominently in some way with our two lovers!
Wonderful story.... I truly hope to see more soon.
And what of Mukuro?!? Something tells me she may figure prominently in some way with our two lovers!
Wonderful story.... I truly hope to see more soon.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your writing like always it the best and this new story kicks ass keep up the great work and post the next chapters soon
your my favorite author
your my favorite author
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You thought I forgot about you - but I didn't! ***insert gleeful dancing for chapter 2***
A few things: Can I get one order of Hiei in a short robe? Then there's Yukina and Mukuro just throwing their respective wrenches into the mix. Why does Kurama agree to help her? She's only going to cause trouble!
Loving the lemony scenes also....but I'm still working on the Hiei in the robe yumminess - you always put the best images in my mind!
A few things: Can I get one order of Hiei in a short robe? Then there's Yukina and Mukuro just throwing their respective wrenches into the mix. Why does Kurama agree to help her? She's only going to cause trouble!
Loving the lemony scenes also....but I'm still working on the Hiei in the robe yumminess - you always put the best images in my mind!
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool start on chapter 2 and oh yeah Hiei is going to kill him if he lets her come over yet maybe Hiei will set her straight on ordering around Kurama(wrong move I think) anyway nice going so far and can't wait for the update