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for Humans: Part Two

by CrimsonFox234

schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your first story and I'm absorbed in this one, but I really have to say that this sequel seems very detached. There was so much emotion in your first story that I'm a little taken aback my the emotional apathy in this one. I still love your stuff and do seriously wish for an update as always. Don't be disheartened at all, but please do continue!^^
person AnnaJaganshi
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kurama, he's all depressed and then get's jumped. Hope things work out. But whose place was he at? Please update the story!
person maddie
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwww
person maddie
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet! not too angsty...but well done...i like the guilt part...poor kurama
person maddie
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WANT MORE! NOW!
person ShuichiShindou
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I need more! <3 please update soon
person alex
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*takes a deep breath* I've only found your fic today, so it took me a while to read it, but i'd love to read some more. As far as I'm concerned, the last chapter is the best yet. I gave up hoping to write a coherent review right now, but i must say i love your fic. And as far as i'm concerned, the sequel is at least as good as the first. Dealing with the emotional side of their relationship must be hard, but you wrote it very good. The last chapter actually hurt. I'm hoping to read more of this.
Love ya, Alex.
person Yukizora
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Completely awesome as all your chapters are!!! Update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Lonely lust
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW!!! I love this story!! It's adorable!! I love Hiei and Kurama's relationship! It just clicks really well! I can't wait to read more so please update soon!!
person BWinner(Not signed in)
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My poor little Kurama! Arg, you're making this sooooo sad! I hope it gets happy soon! UPDATE!