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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okee well you told us that most of your stories were filled with sadness...but you have to agree that Kurama and Hiei are OOC...majorly. You should get them into character or put an OOC warning. Thank you.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I forgot I had already reviewed!!!!!!!!!! Sorry!!!!!!!
I forgot I had already reviewed!!!!!!!!!! Sorry!!!!!!!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um that was a pretty good fic but you just completely made kurama a sterotypical goth but i still really liked it, you had a few spelling errors but it was pretty good keep up the good work!
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Space out your paragraphs towards the end because aff is a bitch sometimes and you can do one of two things: Either get Kurama just a little more in character. Even Youko doesn't act like that. He is cool, calm, collected. Or number two: put OOC warning in the summary so we know. Other than that, the best of luck to you.