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It's me again. I forgot to tell you something before. SPOILER! The scene where Hiei finally breaks free, only to feel Kurama's life extinguish has really stuck with me. You wrote that very we, and the imagery it created is in myrom time to time. It was very touching. That and when Hiei enters the hospital room. Very well done! I just wanted to let you know that your words are following me around. It's a compliment, trust me!

Really love the story but I can't believe you killed Kurama off! Cruel! lol! Erm.... I don't mind if you start a new story or continue this one but just make sure you let us know what happens to Hiei ok! Keep up the good work!

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*sobs* That can't be the end! Kurama has to meet with Hiei again somehow so they can settle what is between them. For both of them to long for each other so strongly, then to have that be it is too, too sad!

This was an excellent update, as usual. This story is quite well crafted, and I feel very close to the characters. You bring them to life for the readers, and for that I compliment you. I am looking forward to your update. Even if that is the end, and there is no happy ending, I will still love this story. Of course, I'd lova a happy ending even more...

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO you can't KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!! NOT AFTER EVERYTHING THEY WENT THROUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::takes deep breaths:: I'm calm now... at least I keep telling myself that. THis is a great fan fic. Please continue and update SOON!!!! HUGGLES
NIKKLER

An interesting concept. Please continue and let us all see where you're headed with this.

WOW, what a twist, karasu is the one that placed the curse and conned Hiei into helping him. I can't wait to read more.

Ah...the plot thickens. I am really enjoying this story. Hiei as a human is funny yet angsty at the same time. And a human child yet! Poor, poor fire demon...um, ex-fire demon? Kurama's situation is interesting as well. Although my mind is spinning with possibilities. I gues i will just have to wait to see what happens next. I look forward to your next update.

Oh, how horrible lol! Poor Hiei. ^_^ I love the masterbation part. Masterbation is sexy. lol

Juts one thing do not make Kurama sleep with this guy or nay other that not Hiei or at leats don't write a lemon please please It pain to see him not with Hiei. *Sniffle* Ok well great Job just remember... um I forgot oh well keep it up

Cool so Hiei is Human Huh nice touch I'll wait to see what happens next