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for To Say Goodbye

by Jeichan

person 66Hiei08
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I loved how you brought Kuronue in. I find him a very intriguing, if little known about, character.
person 66Hiei08
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You really know how to weave a plot! Yes, this is a compliment. :o) Please update soon! You got me hooked.
person papapapuffy
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon
person Nova
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ku-chan, eh? I believed you for some chapters, I hoped...but it's better to name him Ka-chan, or Ka-teme, perhaps! He's a manipulative bastard. And I hoped even for Akiko's child...so many memories about an unborn child...but when you wrote about demons forcing themselves, well, I saw the hint and my hopes are vain again. What I don't understand is how Yoko can be in that Rosie's body (you didn't give her name, so this is my pet name for her, not original, I know) but I'm so happy I got to see him again. Just don't let Ka-teme win in the long run, please. Before I forgot to tell you, your story and style are awesome! Keep going!
person Sweetnsexy89
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! UPDATE SOON!!!
person SweetMisery1
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love this story...continue soon!
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update this story. It's so good. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
person krystle
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it and I will be honest and say that it brought tears to my eyes; I don't usually cry at all but, this story shook me up. Keep up the good work!
person comicfancat
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You killed Keiko?? !! Why? wow you like to kill off everyone don't you.Yet I can't stop reading and want to know more and when you update next(hope soon)Now you'll have Hiei and Yusuke sitting there with far off looks on their faces.Now what
person mhmartini
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too sad! Whether you continue this story or make a new one, please keep writing. If there is a sequel/follow up story, post the title in the last chapter of this one so unobservant people (Okay, me) can find it.

That was a sweet ending. I feel really bad for the momma fox, though. I know Hiei is a painless kiler when he wants to be, but still. I think that's just the mood I am in now.

And yet I hold this hope that the baby fox is Kurama reincarnated, and he will be able to regain enough power to take his old form (Shuuichi) again. But that's just my incoherentness peeking through. Your story makes me wish the brother brings back Karasu again, just so the crow can die a slower and more painful death this time around. Romantic sadist, yep, that's me.

I really enjoyed this story. Please continue writing.