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for How to teach a yokai a lesson

by Suryallee7104

person Perfect_Piscies
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I was wondering when you would update the story.I am sad you stopped updating it on Fanfiction, but i do understand your reasons. I hope you update it on here soon as you can because i want to know what happens. Or how Hiei seduces his chosen mate. I really like the story so far and wish you would update as soon as you can. Their are so many ways the story can go and I can't wait to find out which one you chose. Thanks I'll be waiting patentily ^_^
person Vhee
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey girl! I was sad to learn U left FFN. I just stummbled on this story and when I saw it was U writing I was so happy! Great Job!
person Atayla
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I found this on AFF I thought that you had stopped the series altogether due to those jerks over at fanfiction so I'm glad the story is still up I love it a lot. Oh and someone wwas askign what Heie had meant when he was talkign about the thigns that his kind had been told etc. and what he mad clear to Kuwa. Well Heie as a child was thrown off of a cliff because his mother was an ice maiden like his sister and they don't mate with men so they have only female children and then his mother had Heie and his sister so it was clear his mother had concieved him by havign sex with a man henceforth they threw him off a cliff as a baby in hopes that he would die ets. but he didn't and that's why he went looking for his sister in the first place, I don't know if that is what you wanted to get clear on but yeah he was basically trying to keep Kuwa away fromt he disricmination he went through as a kid. I hope that helps whoever asked that question.
person Imp
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kay I like the plot but the way it is written makes it hard to read Spell Check or an editor would help.
person Hentai_Ann
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O WOW Ahhh Ahhh WOW.....I always thought that Shizuru would get Kurama but your story is SOOOOOooooo much better. I'm so hooked to this story. I can't wait to read more of this story. I hope that you update it soon.
person jou-chan
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update please!
person Andi
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! I am looking forward to the next chapter! Please post soon!
person ceko
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great hope your cane wroite more what happen next hiei sounds the same in my dreams
person db
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep writing!
person The Green Knight
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude. That was harsh. *pulls Hiei away from Shizuru* Wait until next chapter for all that!