rate_review Reviews

ce and Scottie, need to keep writing this! I don't understand why Kurama would be 'that' suicidal... it's... different yes but it's getting angsty. I like angst! Please put up another chapter!

Hey,I know I saw this story on MM.org and it was not any farther than this there and I think it'd been there a while because I kept checking for an update that never came.I really want to know what happens from this point of the story and hope you update it here on AFF.Sooon.Out of normal if fine for most stories if believeable and this could be as well,its written well enough so far to just slide through the fact that attitudes are some what off and yet they should be off with what is happening so far .At least I think so anyway................Hope you update soon

It's a good start; I look forward to more. I have only one suggestion. If you have an author's comment, perhaps you should wait until the end of the chapter to insert it. Having them in the actual story text is highly distracting. Otherwise, very nice, and I will read your next chapter when you post it.

I can't wait for more of this. It's great so far. Please update soon!!!!