rate_review Reviews

It was well-written and fraught with emotional and sexual tension, but it was often very unclear exactly what was happening. For instance, at one point Karasu was playing with Kurama's nipple and later it seemed like was jacking him off, but it never actually says that he moved his hand from Kurama's nipple to his crotch. Kind of a crude example, but it was a smut story so I can't really think of a better example to give since they were all like that. So, yeah...just state more clearly exactly what is going on so that the reader can follow it better and visualize each of the character's movements. I also was not clear on whether or not the whole encounter was a dream. Other than those little bits of confusion, I enjoyed reading it. You're a good writer, keep up the good work. ^_^

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What is it about Kurama being savagely raped/violated that turns me the hell on?
Am I just a sadistic weirdo or does anyone else know what I'm talking about?
AND WHAT MAKES KARASU SO GODDAMN SEXY!?

Great fic, by the way. I really like your style. You do a great job with the erotic bits. Better than I can ever do. . . *cries with jealousy*

Must find your fic on ff.net. It's to beautiful to miss. I adore this! *goes searching*

Your a fanfiction.net author? Hmm... ::runs off to visit "Unwilling" on ff.net::