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for Writer's Block

by CrimsonFox234

person Lady Baltimore
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, sexehhhh...
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great one shot. My only complaint is that they are only one shots. You should take both and make longer stories with them.
person Shuichi
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SO MEAN YOU CAN'T MAKE THAT A ONE SHOT! you need to have kurama go in and find him and thern they fuck!
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP ON A STICK! You totally got me on that one. I so loved this one-shot (I never have arguments with Hiei being a cute little punk goth).

Now, someone just needs to open the door, push Kurama in, and lock it from the outside, and you need to write about it!
person Tankar
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One word: WOWZA ^^

How on earth can you have a writer's block on anything?! That was by far one of the best plot twists (even though you claim that the story had no plot 'v') that I've ever read! I never saw it coming... So the whole time Kuwa and all them were down stairs talking about Kurama... doing stuff, he was just standing outside of Hiei's door? While Hiei... well... Yeah <.<;;; Or did I miss something? ^.^

Either way, love it. Hooray for smut!
person vixenia
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your doing awesome with these one shots. I just read writers block yesterday and what do you know. The very next day you update. ^.^ maybe I'm just abnormally lucky
person tinyteeth
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEE!! you awful little tease you. Oh my goodness that was to too tasty for words.
person RyouKitsune (again... too lazy to sign in ^_^\')
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::bows down to you:: Wonderful, just wonderful...
person Mz.Bitz.
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa you totally got me there. I was reading and everything was going just fine. And then I was like, "What?" and then I was like, "OOOHH!". And then the face of disbelief goes to my.. well, face. I liked it =]
person Lady Aqualyne
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like I like... write a sequel? Maybe? Wow... it was AWESOME!!!! ::Drooll:: and mad hot... you should write more modern stories like this. It was a wonderful taste of something different. I hope to see more like this from you.