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for Writer's Block

by CrimsonFox234

schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"captured" made me melt into a puddle of goo at the end....awwww.....cute hiei...he's such a little uke sometimes XD....oh and it was hott at the other parts XD
person Ab312c
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*angels sing*! that was amazingly well written! very hot. pweez write more!
person diana viera
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really think u should write a continuation to this chapter.and make them have sex in it
person nytekit
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are a really amazing author. i've read other works by you and i love them just as much, if not more, than i do this one. these are really good. smut though they may be, i'm surely enjoying them. nice job! update soon!
person diana viera
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think u should write a continuation to this so that hiei andkurama can fuck each other already.
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I just relaized that I didn't leave a review on the latest chapter (and I read it twice - 100 lashes for me!).

God, you write very hot and intense lemons, and you manage to convey alot of emotion in them as well. I like Kurama as the somewhat-resistant uke, and Hiei as the very horny writer (the muse thing totally melted my brain - Kurama is indeed very inspirational)

More!
person HieiEdInu4Ever
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love these yummy lemons! I was just introduced to YYH while reading a manga magazine, which had a hot picture of all the Team Urameshi ppl. So, then I went into a Yu Yu Hakusho craze and I downloaded so many wallpapers and pictures and music. I have to admit that this story finally made me realize that I LOOVE Kurama and Hiei as a couple, so....
ARIGATOU!!! ^0^
person jaze
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love these stories contiue them please
person setosgirl
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Writers Block: Very, very hot. Sweetly hot, though. ^_^

Through the Door: OMG, that was so sad! Awesome!

Captured: Okay, HAAAAWT! Hot hot hot hot hot! And it gave me some awesome inspiration for htIM RPG I'm doing as we speak.... Seto Kaiba just delivered hte best blow job he's ever done. XD

Detention: *huggle* Do I have to say Hot again? Because I will. Because it is. Really.

Do you count Yoko as Kurama? by that, I mean, do you think that he'll get to be Hiei's seme at some point, and not just almost and implied, as in Caputerd? ^^ If not, I don't care, this is still going in my Recommended Reading. ^_^ I just think Yoko/Hiei is uber-hot. Of course, seems that most of your smut is hawt, so I'm drooling over what you could do with that!
person saiyan Kitsune Foxfire
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really enjoyed the four one shots. They were really good. The first chapter started to remind me of Gravitation's opening, and I was surpised to find out Kurama was the theif. You've doone a good job. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more