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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, I even went back today and read the entire story over, and I must give you cookies on your characterization. You also don't see many fics that include such detailed descrpitions of training, fighting and sword stances.
The non-responsive Hiei was dead on, and Kurama's advice was also dead on and just as amusing. I'm loving this!
The non-responsive Hiei was dead on, and Kurama's advice was also dead on and just as amusing. I'm loving this!
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squee! ^o^ (Sorry, brief fangirl moment >>;)
I'm so glad parts of the site are back up, arent you? ^^ Anyway, another awesome chap and I absolutely can't wait for the next...cause you know how much of a Hieibara fangirl I am. hehehe. XD
Later hun.
I'm so glad parts of the site are back up, arent you? ^^ Anyway, another awesome chap and I absolutely can't wait for the next...cause you know how much of a Hieibara fangirl I am. hehehe. XD
Later hun.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ Lovely chapter!! I just loved it!! Obviously Hiei's the type to like to watch hahaha so Kuwa should you know ^^;; ok I'll stop there anyway I just loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one!!
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I have never read a story that have Kuwabara and Kurama as lovers. Anyway, I love the story! Please continue it.
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was good! I love the sword stands I think it every much ture since it remind me of the Rurouni Kenshin sword stands. Also I love how Hiei thinks it should have been him to be Kazuma first. So just what dose Kurama have plan for them? Or is it for all of them?
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cold shower here I come! Seriously, this is another excellent chapter! Not only is there Kuwabara in it, there is nekid Kuwabara getting it on with another hot redhead. I don't know about anyone else, but thats a win win situation in my book anyday. I can't wait so see where you're heading with this as well as the next chapter. I shall be waiting with bated breath! ~Kenya
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Hiei is so clueless, he hasn't truly admitted to himself that he likes Kuwabara. He's such a stubborn little demon. The entire scene with the sword stances was very well done, and - as usual - the lemon was very very hot. You write a wonderfully in character and sensual Kurama, and Kuwabara's dialogue with and reactions to Kurama have me laughing at times (because it's so right on).
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!! ^^ Glad to see this story back!! (huggles story) I just LOVE it ^^. I love anything where Kuwa gets lovin' really hehehe ^^. That was an excellent chapter!! You just keep everyone in character!! I just LOVE it ^^. I can't wait to see what you have planed next!! Oh...and I wasn't counting the stances!! ^^ Anyway, please update soon!! ^^
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally I have read it all the way through and I have to tell you I love you so much. You put two of my favorites well three in here, uke Kuwabara, inexperienced Kuwabara, and jealous Hiei, I love them all. Kuwabara is my most favorite of all ukes and I love you for the attention you're giving him. I can't wait for more.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is just awesome. Hiei likes to watch. Kuwabara likes to be watched. Just...lovely. *huggles*