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Man, who would have thought Kuwabara had such a pain fetish? But then again, I'm beginning to think there isn't much that's he's not willing to try...how hot, and Hiei...he must think he's in heaven, the little peeping tom! I can't wait to see whats next!

Once agian perfect.

luved this chapter. it was too funny. having hiei give commands and them actually doing them. just too hot. cant wait for the next chapter. :D

wow this was a sexay chapter heheh i would like three lemons for free plse!! XD i got that jk after i saw kuwa's offer lol! can't wait for the next one! btw this is the best Kuwa/Kur/Hiei i'v ever read!

GOOD CHAPTER! heheeh, I wonder what Hiei going to do to Kuwabara in the next one. Update soon!

oh GOD THIS IS SO HOT!!! ^___^ yay!! hiei/kuwabara lemon coming soon! and tons of kurama/kuwabara goodness!!!

...I want...A BIJILLION LEMONS for free! lol just kidding! how about three lemons! one with Kurama/Kuwabara, Hiei/Kuwabara and then one with Kurama/Kuwabara/Hiei! ^__________^ Yum! Great chapter! AND HIEI IS SUCH A PERVERT!! LOL Thought I'd never see the day! Good luck with next one and hurry with the update!!

when i first started reading this i thought i wasnt going to enjoy it. so far i cant stop reading it. it is too funny, especially with hiei watching our two red heads. i luv that. finally hiei got a taste of kuwa. i wonder if would come back for more. ;) anyway cant wait to read more anf find out wat happens when the tournament finally approaches.

Wonderful it was all so wonderful. I like the thought of the two of them leaving their marks on their uke, it's so possesive. But that's also what confuses me about Hiei, now that he had has Kuwabara is he going to be willing to share him with Kurama?

Yeah, and now I have to clean up my brain. See, I'm a Hiei fan, and I definitely stay away from the Hiei/Kuwabara pairing at all costs because well, I don't see it. However, you broke my rule. Not only did you write it so that it was believable, you also wrote it hot. That is definitely a tribute to how good and author you are - you get the non-believers to beileve.

And I'm not Kuwabara bashing at all - I love his character and am very against him being portrayed OOC by the clueless yaoi fangirls out there. Personally, I just don't slash him, but I do make sure to present him adequately in my fics. You do him wonders in yours.

BTW, I also love Hiei burning his lover. Obviously, he has heat control, and in the midst of passion, he is sure to lose some control and accidentally burn his partner - especially if Kuwabara is THAT good.

**applause**

Hey, great chapter! heheeh, I can see Hiei doing that. Anyway, Update soon! I can't wait to read what going to happen next.