rate_review Reviews

Hehehe. Lovely as always hun, I envy your writing skills. ^o^ And your threesome was truly something.

Hey, Cillaxox! Great chapter, the lemon was great! I can't wait for the next chapter. So Kurama like Kuwabara now, eh? Update soon!

i think I came as I read this...heh heh...im so horny now!!!! great job!

*sobs* its gonna be over!! :( but this chapter was simply DELICIOUS!! kudos to you you get cookie!!

Wow, you weren't kidding when you said: "3 lemons for free." And you made Kurama uke (I so love you for that). I like that Kuwabara didn't let Hiei top him and Hiei had to settle for something else; if those two are going to be involved in anything,of course there are going to be complications - they're both too stubborn to let something like that happen so easily.

And I loved the image of Kuwabara finding the right spot and Kurama's knees buckling. Sometimes our favourite kitsune can't even control himself.

But the Hiei/Kuwabara lemon, then the Kurama/Kuwabara lemon, then the threesome...YOU SPOIL ME. Wonderful chapter. Gyah...now I need a sponge to clean up the brain on my floor.

You know, I am not sure which I find more entertaining, the story or your A/N dialogues at the end of each chapter. On another note, you questioned the spelling of Shuuichi in the first chapter. I say don't worry about it. You are trying to spell something phonetically in romanji, that can only be 100% correct in Hirigana, Katakana, or Kanji. Basically, spell it the way you pronounce it, and it will be correct. Heck, the subtitlers for anime can't always agree on how to spell the names of characters. Look at Neharenia/Nehalenia from Sailor Moon as an example. Anywho, now that I have written a small book to attach to your story, I hope you continue writing. You do a great job. ja!

I would like three lemons for $1. Thank you. That was a great finish to my night. It is the first time I have ever enjoyed a slah fanfic with Kuwabara as a central player in the relationship. I normally dislike him becasue he's such an idiot but I haven't seen all the episodes in Japanese yet. So I might be missing something. I will definately be back to read the rest of this. I really do like this Kuwabara. Madre Etva.

I love this story...sorry for not reviewing lately but I was away ^^; Anyway I just LOVED both chapters! They were both hot and juciy! Oh man...does Kuwa-chan have more then just 'sex' feelings for the two? Like does he like them? If so, well they hurt him? Oh man you are just an awesome writer! Please continue soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! ^_^

That was too hot for words. Hiei is such a fucking perv. I love it. I think he gives orders just as pervy as Yusuke, lol. And Hiei wants Kuwa after practice ^_^ I love this fic. It's so much fun and so hot. I never thought I would want to be Kuwa in any life, BUT SHIT! If it meant I could get fucked by Kurama and then Hiei, I could make an exception. I can't wait for Hiei to nail Kuwa again! These boys are soooo naughty, and poor Yusuke is off sleeping with snakes and getting screamed at by Genkai while these three are all doing to nasty. Too perfect!

That was...that was...hold on, let me find my brain. *searches*

Hot. YEAH THAT WAS HOT. No, I will not calm down.

Hiei...giving orders....*grabs fan*. Then being all surly and at the very end telling Kuwabara that he wants him after training tomorrow? Amazing.

Great chapter, I know the review is a little weak, but I'm speechless, take that as a good thing. I think I'll need a bowl to put my brain in for the next chapter.