rate_review Reviews

i never get tired of of your writing. i always look forward to the coming chapters of your stories. they are amazing. keep writing you are one of the arthurs who take writing to a whole different level. i agree i think it was best to end it there, the story was amazing, AND awesome lemon, made me horny, lol. keep writing, ill support you!!

of course, it's ok!*hugs back then proceeds to go into fangirl mode* that was freakin' awesome! this so going to be my favorite chapter, until further notice. first it was all sweet with hiei making sure yusuke was positive in his decision (why do i feel like i spelled that totally wrong?) to that wonderfully hot bout of malexmale smex and fluff. and boy, was it hawt! :drools: i love the way yusuke was the blushing virgin one mintue and forceful seme-wannabe the next then back again. and the part when he said "you have your orders, get to work!" had me cracking up. i feel kinda sorry for them to have another mission so soon but then i don't, seeing how it'll probably just further my enjoyment of this story. and i'm rambling, so i'll take that as my cue for me to take my arse to bed. great work, i'm soooooo looking foward to your next update. so until next time , ja.

i just wanted to agree with kogas hentai luver. yusuke is perfect for switching between seme and uke roles. i, too, dont care who (except for kuwabara *shudders* that's just nasty....) he gets it from as long as he's getting some. preferably from hiei, because hiei is the man and my fav character. ^__^

Go Kurama! for helping these two break the ice. Wow. I love how Hiei has to show Yusuke how to do everything, yet he wants Yusuke to be seme. Totally cool. The lemon was really hot and sweat. And you know I like a lot of foreplay, so thanks ^_^ Shit! Between Kurama and Hiei, I don't know who I prefer with Yusuke. I guess it doesn't matter. As long as Yusuke is either being fucked or fucking someone, I'm happy. I'm such a Yusuke whore, LOL. I liked the way you used the cannon storyline in order to lead into the lemon between Hiei and Yusuke. Nicely done and very refreshing.

Wow, that was wonderfully hot, I just read it all in one shot, and I loved it! I have a soft spot for the Maze Castle storyline, and I liked seeing your representation - but, dude, chapter 5 was hot (did I say that?), yeah, hot.

:reaches for the drool bucket again:

Very nicely done. The lemon was perfect, as is the characterizations. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Update soon please.

nice lemon

good chapter. i liked the little chat between kurama and hiei and the way kurama is sorta playing matchmaker for the two. and now that the fighting is over, hiei can explore and examine these feelings he's been having. so i'm very much looking foward to the next chappie. oh and nice title for the story too, btw. ^__^

nice i can't wait to see how you break away from the cannon

Chapters 2 & 3

I'm always so amazed at how calm, cool and sexy Kurama is during his fights. He's so calculating and deadly, but also hot and yummy. That was one of my favorite scenes in YuYu.

As for Kuwa's fight, I didn't really care for his fight in the anime. I thought they dragged it out way too much, but you shortened it to where I really enjoyed reading it. I loved all of Hiei's inner thoughts and struggles regarding Yusuke. I think Hiei needs his butt pinched. He's such a chibi! I can't wait for Hiei and Yusuke's battle. Although I loved Kurama and Yusuke's battles, Hiei's was my favorite. I loved how he cuts his opponants down within the blink of an eye. Too cool! Yusuke's fight will be cool too. But what I'm really waiting for is some 'special' time between Yusuke and Hiei ^_~ See ya next chappie.