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for Dreams and Reality

by hColleen

person CrimsonFox
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your bribery worked... but unfortunately all I can say is that I really, really like the story... sorry, that is actually all I have. So, please, keep going.
person Kettricken
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee, this is fun. =D
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its getting nicer and hotter too.
I will see how this turns out in the next chapter.
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this, it's really cute. Update soon.
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was so great and so funny. You know Kurama/Hiei pairings are my least favorite, but I promised I would read this regardless. I am soooo glad I did. I can't wait for more. The 'hormonal' Kurama lines are hysterical. I laughed my ass off. I loved that Yusuke couldn't keep his eyes off of Kurama's boobs. Too funny! I love that Hiei is being so sweet and understanding and supportive. That's a nice change. You and Shadow have done a wonderful job. Is Shadow going to draw Kurama as a girl. And if she does, I want to know where I can see them. I lost the last link to her website, my bad . I'll email you tomorrow. I've been swamped getting my daughter ready for school which starts Wednesday. Talk to ya later and once again KICK ASS JOB TO YOU AND SHADOW!!!!!
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I'm still snickering. Why'd you have to make him...er...her, hormonal though? It just makes all us women look bad.
I'm just kidding.

I can't wait to see where this goes, I got hit in the back of the head with this one - the dream seemed so...sinister...and when you look back it makes sense, but I wasn't expecting Kurama to turn into a woman.

I hope Hiei doesn't get him...er...her pregnant. Tthat will just be messy.

Great writing, you made me laugh out loud a few times.
person Suryallee
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! Thats great!!!
I love this, please continue it soon!
person Tendrilrake
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderfull story I have found here! Oh, lucky, lucky day!!! *Huggles* You're the greatest- and as for reviewing your stories, its the least I can do! And besides, how can I NOT read them- they're the best! *Still snikering slightly* Kurama- as a girl! hoo boy- mind you, I still want him to turn back... Kurama's just not the same without his malenessnesses. ~_^
I loved how you handled his emotines, as well- the anger is justified, because of what has just happend, but its amplified as well because he's now female! Coauthoring seems to rival your usual writting -in a good way- keep it up!