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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're gunna make me wait!!! Gah!!! Evil, evil woman!!! ^-^ On the otehr hand, loved it as always. *Laughing* Poor, poor Boton. She's already on the edge what with Yusuke and Koenma... but her poor sanity is at stake here! :P Looking forward to chapter five!!! Cheese and wine for all!
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting idea, and quite well done, too. I look forward to the epilogue -- keep up the good work!
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I like this story a lot. How did I miss it before? I really enjoyed reading it though. Will Kurama's affliction, although temporary, have any relapses? That would make life interesting.
I look forward to your next update.
I look forward to your next update.
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IEEKS!
I mean food!Wie Essen! Und nicht fuß! Sorry, without my ws word I am sooo lost sometimes. More so when I try to write a reviuw meanwhile I laugh my head of!
I love your story, I really do! It makes me laugh and thats good!
(Colleen studiert Deutsch seit drei Jare im Uni ;) ) Hofenlich, finden Sie es gern :D (und, hofenlich sind meiner Deutsch nicht so schecht…)
Studiert Deutsch seit drei Jahren an der Uni/ Hoffentlich Finden Sie es gut( Nicht gern!) / Und hoffentlich /ist/ mein/ Deutsch nicht so schlecht.
It´s not so bad as you think, German is a HARD language to learn! I hope that helps a little. I have the same problems all the time with the English, I think English is easier to learn as German, and I dont mean with it British English(Oxford). In the German language you have for everything a different word with mostly three different meanings and besides that they mostly have some Slang meanings too, so its sometimes really hard to understand and learn.
I have gone to school 10 years and cant write my own language correctly by now, funny ne? The most geremans do, because you need a study of 6 to 8 years to learn all of the language correctly.
Oh, can write corectly thats not wht I mean, but the grammar rules of German are one of the worst in the world. Here they have changed the rules lately, my daughter learns them now in school, but I think its bullshit, because they messed the language up more as before and not made it easier!
Anyway, I hope you have fun with it and dont worry, its going better with practise.
Need some help?
I mean food!Wie Essen! Und nicht fuß! Sorry, without my ws word I am sooo lost sometimes. More so when I try to write a reviuw meanwhile I laugh my head of!
I love your story, I really do! It makes me laugh and thats good!
(Colleen studiert Deutsch seit drei Jare im Uni ;) ) Hofenlich, finden Sie es gern :D (und, hofenlich sind meiner Deutsch nicht so schecht…)
Studiert Deutsch seit drei Jahren an der Uni/ Hoffentlich Finden Sie es gut( Nicht gern!) / Und hoffentlich /ist/ mein/ Deutsch nicht so schlecht.
It´s not so bad as you think, German is a HARD language to learn! I hope that helps a little. I have the same problems all the time with the English, I think English is easier to learn as German, and I dont mean with it British English(Oxford). In the German language you have for everything a different word with mostly three different meanings and besides that they mostly have some Slang meanings too, so its sometimes really hard to understand and learn.
I have gone to school 10 years and cant write my own language correctly by now, funny ne? The most geremans do, because you need a study of 6 to 8 years to learn all of the language correctly.
Oh, can write corectly thats not wht I mean, but the grammar rules of German are one of the worst in the world. Here they have changed the rules lately, my daughter learns them now in school, but I think its bullshit, because they messed the language up more as before and not made it easier!
Anyway, I hope you have fun with it and dont worry, its going better with practise.
Need some help?
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!
I mean Germans, not geremans!
Stupid me!
I mean Germans, not geremans!
Stupid me!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Announcer: And now we return to BlueUtopiah, who is currently on the floor fanning herself after reading hcolleen & shadow's wonderful lemon!
No, really, that was hot...and I find it so hard to write lemons. Does it just pour out of you, ready made? Because you guys make it look easy! I loved this chapter - Kurama returned to his wonderful bishie form and there was a surprise uke Hiei in the end (no pun intended).
Cheers for a second lemon! And what are you guys going to do to Yusuke?
BTW, I wasn't upset at all about the mood swings, I was just poking fun (most likely because I am a moody bitch myself).
Huzzah!
No, really, that was hot...and I find it so hard to write lemons. Does it just pour out of you, ready made? Because you guys make it look easy! I loved this chapter - Kurama returned to his wonderful bishie form and there was a surprise uke Hiei in the end (no pun intended).
Cheers for a second lemon! And what are you guys going to do to Yusuke?
BTW, I wasn't upset at all about the mood swings, I was just poking fun (most likely because I am a moody bitch myself).
Huzzah!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, yummy lemon. Update soon.
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squees* well.. i like really weird ass things.. and i totally have to hand it to the both of you. LOL. it may have taken me forever to get to reading this..... but.. I DID FINALLY GET TO IT!! lol. and i really look forward to seeing what you do with it! it's great! SOOO amusing! and well written. ^^ and i love how you've written the characters. heh..even if Kura is a girl.. which.. is kinda funny... interesting.. ironic.. and sad for him all at once. so yes! Ra likes it! LoL. as usual. ^_^
*hugs and kisses*
Ra
*hugs and kisses*
Ra
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shit! I thought I already reviewed chappie 3, sorry for my tardiness. Kurama rocks when he gets all quite and polite. Because we all know how fucking evil and deadly he is, yummmmmy. I can't wait for Kurama to have his wicked way with Hiei. I'm glad to know though that Hiei prefers Kurama as a male, and as well he should. It would be so funny to keep having Yusuke eyeballing Kurama's boobs. I love the way Kurama reacts to it, ya know, all pissy. This whole fic is cute, funny and priceless. Keep it going girl!!!!!!
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK ok ok, now I understand the moodiness and the neediness - it's part of the potion! And the neediness is necesary so that Hiei and Kurama's relationship could progress.
You have a fine eye for detail and really portray the scene without being too wordy. I like your choice of words too (mollified being one example), you have a great sense of vocabulary, and the dialogue is very in-character.
Please do continue! and yea for lemons!
You have a fine eye for detail and really portray the scene without being too wordy. I like your choice of words too (mollified being one example), you have a great sense of vocabulary, and the dialogue is very in-character.
Please do continue! and yea for lemons!