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person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved Kurama's revenge. I loved Yusuke's reaction even more. I can't wait to see where it might lead for all three sexy demons. Update soon.
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yusuke wants Hiei and Kuuuraaamma, Yusuke wants Hiei and Kuuuuraaaammma. I love singing about my Yusuke or my Koga. That was great! Yusuke wanking off, hehehehe. I love Yusuke wanking off. I couldn't believe the teaser you sent me. I was soooooo happy. But ya know, you still didn't tell us who Yusuke would have called out. But then again, he was trying to formulate two words, which were probably Hiei and Kurama since he was daydreaming about them. I've still been pretty out of it, making my brain kinda slow, but I'll email you later tonight. Thank you for the extra Yusuke scene. And I'm not a 'brat'! ***stomps off mumbling "I'm not a brat, just spoiled" ^_^ ****** I just luffffff you sooooo much. Hugs and kisses all day and all night.
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are WRONG and BAD for teasing me like that.

But you give me hope for the future. Now, I'm just way too jazzed about the epilogue.

Of course, very well-written, and of course, wonderfully smutty.
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I'm going to have to find a better drool bucket if there's going to be a second lemon....and a more comfortable floor.

I laughed so hard during this chapter. I loved Yusuke's eloquence ("You had big boobs, okay!"), you can always count on Yusuke to shoot straight. However, I would not have had any arguments if Hiei and Kurama did more than look at Yusuke.

It was still wonderfully funny, humiliation always makes me laugh. And I also love how you let Hiei just beat the snot out of Seimigaku, it was nice to see Hiei let loose.
person Shuichi Shindou
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO!!!! thats awesome. Kurama a girl is funny... Hehe... My favs part was hiei talking about "his fox doesn't have ovaries" and yusuke "like you are the same boy in the inside" and kurama all like "I have ovaries!" lmao so cute so funny!
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was awesome!!!!!!!!! Poor Yusuke. But he sure deserved it. I wish all we women could do that to all the guys that have stared at our boobs like vultures ready to swoop in. Yusuke has a big diiiiick, Yusuke has a big diiiiiiick. I love my Yusuke. I wish Kurama and Hiei would have played with him a bit more, but I don't think that Yusuke would really be into that sort of thing......... orrrrrrrrrrr ????????????????? To bad we can't hear what or who Yusuke calls out after taking care of his little (I mean, BIG) problem, hehehehehehe. Too hot and sexy. Oh. And I love it when Hiei gets to beat the shit out of someone who's injured one of his friends or lover. It's so 'night in shining armor' like. Fuck, I'm such a romantic. ^_^ You and Shadow have done a marvelous job with this fic. You've managed to revitalize my interest in the Hiei/Kurama pairing. Although, I still won't write one unless Yusuke is in it, LOL. Can't wait for the epilogue.
person Tendrilrake
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gwaking* Oh... how could they do that to Yusuke!!! Mind you...I greatly appreciated the mental image. :P Hmm... can't think of which story this tied into... but gimme time, i'll figure it out! ^-^ *Gasps* an epoluge!!! yay!!! HURRY UP PEOPLE AND REVIEW GODAMNIT!!!
This was probably my most favorit chapter- loved how Kurama got revenge- loved how Hiei got to 'watch' *snickering* Though i can't help but wonder... will this turn into a three some? couldn't care less either way- both are fine, but when you thorw Yusuke into the mix, things can't help but get exciting. ~_^
person MultifacetedTune
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and imaginative, with wonderful characterizations and details. I can't wait for the epilogue -- keep up the good work!!!
person Draikitha
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. I read this story on Fan fiction and over here, and since fanfiction screws up my reviews I'll just review here. ;P
Plus if it helps with review count right? :ninja:
Wonderful story you two, I liked it alot, and while it was different, it wasn't the bad kind so I think you did good. <3
Awesome story, hope to see the epilouge soon. =P

<3 Melanie
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Hiei can be so hot and sexy. I liked how you psyched out Kurama into thinking Hiei was going to take him, but Hiei only wanted to be on top of Kurama while he was taken. Very nice. God, Boton is such a dizzy freak, lol. Sometimes I'l just like to slap some sense into her, ya know. Looking forward to the next chapter.