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hahahaha, sorry, couldn't help but (sadistically) laugh at poor Kurama's misfortune. (I've only read the first chapter) Good work, by the way!

Okay! Hiei and Kurama are just too damn sweat. All I want to do is cuddle Hiei and spank Kurama, lol. This was a wonderful fic. I'm still laughing about what they did to Yusuke though, heheheheh. Couldn't have asked for better. This was certainly another winning story. ^_^

it was a really good epilogue! i now understand why everyones says you are a great writer!!!

...because it was awesome torture?? *giggles* and yes i LOVED it!! and my RA do i LOVE AND ADORE you for the Kuronue referance!! omfr... you have no idea..... i swear... i think i love you more for that then i do the torture..!! if i dont.. well its *damn* near close... O O;;


anywho... beautiful fic . from the both of you. ^^ though i think you couldn't get me to say a bad word about one of YOUR fics[or collaberations, such as this case] hcolleen unless you really desperately tried with all your heart... *snickers* ..yes that was one of my twisted attempts at a compliment, yet again. heh. i hope you like this one as well. ^^ only the best for ya! ^~


well.. it's hard editing red in black on black - aka i cannot see what i'm typing as i type it..... so... this is all you're gonna get for this one. heh.. ^^;; but like i said, beautiful and amusing work. loved the mutual trust thing. and the bath. it makes it more, i don't know.. realistic for their relationship? lol. that just sounds way to cliche.. but you know what i mean. ^^


Ra

^__^ Yes, indeed I did, it was... cute. =P

Ah, different is good sometimes, in this case yes. ^^ <3

Awesome story you two. <33

You guys are so cruel! Doing that to Yusuke. It seems he liked it so I guess it isnt too bad. I really liked your story. I wouldnt have been able to tell that 2 people wrote it if you hadn't told us so. Too bad you guys wont write more together.

Wow...just wow. (Did I say wow?) OK, I've got some pillows, and I'm quite comfortable on the floor. I loved the whole bathing scene - I think things like that are very romantic and sweet, and there's not enough of that in fanfiction. (Gets in line to give Kurama a bath - damn, that's a long line!). Also, Kurama just losing control and practically impaling himself on Hiei was amazing. Kurama is usually very calm and collected, but of course, you've been having fun by putting him in situations where he is anything but that. I love when Hiei is protrayed as secretly tender, I always thought he had a great capacity for love and that he just saves it up for the right person (Kurama).

Well done, I really enjoyed this, and you get a cookie for finishing this so quickly! I need to take lessons from you guys!

Mmmm.... Nummy lemon. I loved how tender and thoughtful Hiei was being. [Blink blink] this is the prequel to Truth Dice or Dare O.o? I'll have to reread it now.

Another awesome story. I can't wait to see what you write next.

great story. though i am offended about the whole 'kurama being gay' part. still the wording was great and the plot was excelent