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The plot was excellent and the flow was very good there are a few places where the flow of the plot does get messed up a little so you might want to go over another time

Yumm. I mean really, that was so sexy. I loved the smut, it was tasteful and the emotions between the two were so cute. I really wish you would do a sequel because you did the pairing so well.

Wondeful Job

LY

I love this fic and this pairing. There's so few fics out there for it, and this may have just become my favorite. I love the closet romantic and secretly caring father Enma. And suspicous Koenma having no clue that his father is actually trying to make him happy.

One little note. You referred to Koenma as Koenma Daioh in the beginning. Daioh is actually a title literally meaning big king. It's not applied to Koenma's name, because he's not the top dog.

I love your story and I would like to read more. I couldn't find your reveiw box on your site so I m sending you one here. You should continue with the story that you are writing It is so well pu together. You should put the ties that bind up on Adult fanfiction I bet you will get a lot of good reveiws. Email me when you come out with the next part for ties that bind please. For those that read everyones reveiws go to her website and get ties that bind its great.

Yuske was a bit outa character but who cares, the plot was good you didn't rush them or the story. nice idea with the bonding cerimony just a cut none of that extra fluff. Though what i like about your writing is that you put in all the details like describing what the bond caused down to the very memory and emotion. oH by the way I usually don't read the ones with koenma because he will always remind me of the little boy image but you did a good job makin him sound sexy (even with that one mentin of the pacifier which was neccessary since I was wondering when that would show up). LOVED IT soooo good and hope to see more of your work soon let the plot bunnies abound whoot!

I REALLY enjoyed this fic. You portrayed Koenma so well. I always thought that he had so much power - something that was never explored in the show. I like how you got to see glimpses of that power, and that he was more confident than Yusuke. Your writing is full of these little touches that make a beautiful whole, it is well-detailed and amazing. There's so much I could compliment you on, there just isn't enough space.

Well-done, and just beautiful. If you have anything else - please post it!

Very well written. I didn't get the "weepy" thing from Yusuke...more like "needy and don't know how to get what I want" virgin thing. Awsome story! Aren't sequal bunnies a pain (and a bane) in the butt? Thank you for sharing this with us :D

I think this story is very well written, and Iliked it very much nice work

Please continue!!!!!! I want to see more! I love this pairing and you made it realistic. Thank you for the fan service!!!

I love you. Yusuke/Koenma is another pet pairing of mine. Oh I'm excited, but I have been abusing exclamation marks lately.