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Aaaaaw! Poor widdle baby! *sniffle*

O.O!!!!!!!!!!!! OH. MY. GOD!!!!!!!!!!! I'm not even a male and I ended up crossing my legs!!!!!!!! I also had NO idea that 'thats' what happen or how it happens, o'ever *rolls eyes* Damn for some reason I feel VERY sorry for all males right now o.o;...anyway I've been reading the other story--witch led me to this story thanks to your memo, anyway your other story...I'm loving to death!!!! ^_^ It's SO sweet!!!! Hiei's 'SO' OOC but in a good way ^-^!!!!! Hehe...Fluffy!Hiei.....

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Miss War-chan ^_~

um...wow, he got circumsized(sp?). well...you were relle descriptive...but that's a good thing! poor baby, yay hiei! you made him out to be a very great father...secretive, but caring....willing to do anything for his loved ones...he even will allow kuwabara to mate(propse) to yukina!!

that was great!

i really love this story! i felt bad for their baby but i was cute on how hiei was making his son all better. Please i beg of u to make another part to the story it will make me so happy. because your a great writer with good ideas! anyway uh.... good story and theirs an evil monkey in my closet so i gotta hide right now so bye bye.

This wasn't bad at all ,you did rather well if I remember the procedure although I've not been to one to know how the hole thing goes to a tee.Didn't know demons had to suffer through that as well (poor guys) hehe.Looking forward to the other stories.

Weirded out? Maybe a little, but not in a bad way. The story was actually quite informative. I enjoyed reading it, but I'm glad you chose to make this subject a side one shot to the main story. On its own, without a main story attached to it, it would have seemed odd. Like this it was a touch personal, but you're right, this happens on a daily basis, so it did not seem oout of place this way. I enjoyed Hiei'sr eaction of grab the baby and hide so no one sees the cuddly/soft side of him. Very sweet. I enjoyed it very much, and now I will go and read the other half of chapter 13 of Heights. ]

Very well done.

I am glad you put this in. Many authors are too afraid to, but it does happen a lot actually, but most authors are just too afraid to breach the subject. Good job on writing it out too. I commend your courage.